Soo, I was thinking of writing a story, about a girl, whose Mom never let her out of her basement bedroom, she taught herself to read and write, and she cooked for herself. Then, when she turned 15, she escaped and a boy her age found her. He showed her the world and life, and one day...the end up marrying eachother. If this a good story idea?!
Making the story seem über cliché and dramatically unrealistic would make it lose its unique touch, but since this idea isn't exactly what I consider original I won't say much. Since you posted your idea I expect the story to be brilliant, not exactly world famous kind of brilliant but good enough to be comprehensible and not a pile of sappy gibberish. Good luck!
Well, I don't really care about YOUR opinion, I think the plot line is good and that's all that matters to me
Here's a twist. (Since you brought up the Rapunzel thing.) the mom is an evil witch and made herself look older. The mom cast a spell on the dad to make him look younger. So the dad ends up being the guy the girl like.