Hunter's POV: Hi, my name is Ethan Gold, but everyone calls me Hunter. I'm always the I don't care, don't do my work kind if guy. And my best friend, Cindy aka Candy is the one who always cheers me up and is trying to make me do my work. It always works, no matter what. Even when I'm having a bad day. We're just friends, but everyone thinks we are dating because we hang out a lot. No big deal to me, because I like someone else and I told her. She likes that we are best friends that can tell each other anything, I think it's cool, too. Me, Cindy, Livi (Cindy's best 'girl' friend), and Seth (my best 'guy' friend). We are all friends and have loved each other since the first day of 8th grade. We are always in a group, at lunch, recesses, classes, and after school. We just can't get enough of each other! Cindy's POV: Yeah, I would say that me and Hunter were close friends. But everyone thinks we are dating, and were not. He is cute, a little, but no body knows that. I would never tell them, if I did they would freaking kill me and laugh at me! To top this all of, you will never guess that my ex boyfriend sits behind me in two of my classes. And it's the first week of school! I hope Hunter doesn't fail, Seth would like me as a friend more and my ex would stop ignoring me so much! We are like ignoring each other. Which now that I think about it, it doesn't really matter. My heart belongs in Hunter's greyish blue eyes.... Should I continue ir drop dead?
Candy's POV: The beginning: I was in fourth grade, four years exactly from the first day I met him. I can remember his soft touch and smooth hair, like it was yesterday. We dated for 17 weeks, but it felt longer. Little me didn't care, I loved him, but their were other fish in the sea. Then I found out, I couldn't live without him. I was always constantly thinking about him. Hopefully, my love will end and he.... would be out of my life for good. The same year I met Livi, was the same year I fell in love with him. Garett was his name. Livi and I were close, as if she were my sister. We hanged out a lot, then our classes changed and we grew apart. Yet, I knew that wasn't the last time we will ever speak to each other. Her randomness was to awesome to forget. Two years later, it was the beginning of middle school and I had and exploratory with Hunter. I fell in love with his smooth hair and ever time he flipped it, I felt like he knew I was watching him. I felt a strong connection between us two, like magnets. Did he feel the same way? Or am I just letting my feelings get the best of me? After that me and Hunter started talking and we seemed to like each other as friends. He turned out to be a pretty cool guy. I think he was a kid just wanting to hang loose and have fun. And I was totally right. Finally, eight grade came and it was the last year of middle school. The first day wasn't so bad. Yet, it wasn't so good either. I had my unwanted class S.S. my favorite two exploratories Chorus and Art, Math, my favorite and then Sci and ELA with my ex. I hated it! Especially, at the end of the day and we just sit there and try and make no eyes contact at all. And I think I think I still had feelings for him. Oh, no! Continue or let it die?
Hunter's POV: "Ugh," I moaned as I got on the bus. I walked to the back as usual in 7th grade. I saw some 6th graders and almost yelled at them to go to the front. I waited for Cindy to get on the bus. She went to the back also and sat in front of me and turned around. "Hey, sleepy head." She said excitedly, examining my tired face. I moaned at her and smiled slowly, trying to walk my face up. She laughed and turned around and texted her friends. I waited for my other bus buddy, Tyler. Who was in 7th grade, to bad he wasn't in my grade(8th). He is to hyper like Cindy. I'm the quiet one, but who cares anyway? He was the last one to get on the bus. And then the bus was really crowded with hyper 6th graders and annoyed 8th graders. The 7th graders didn't really care much, I guess. "Hey, lovers." Tyler said to us when he was in the back. I laughed, then said, "we are not lovers. Just really good friends." "What ever, how was your summer? I did... absolutely nothing! What about you?" "Same," I said with my bored face I always have on school days. Cindy was eavesdropping and turned around. "I went on a cruise and got guys numbers." She smiled happily. "Cool," me and Tyler said. We can always count on Cindy to cheer us up or make a joke. She was my friend, but so far we only had our exploritories and the bus ride home together. Hopefully, this year will change and we will at least have two classes together. We got off the bus and went to our classes. I walked slow and I could tell Cindy was lost. I really didn't care if I was late. Our bus was already late so what's new? I went to the bathroom and she continued walking. The 8th grade section was easy to get lost in. I looked at myself in the mirror and saw my messed up, yet sexy hair. "A new year, my old self." I rolled my eyes and walked to my class. I walked in and to my surprise, I saw Cindy. Wow, we finally had a class together. What are the odds?
Well, first you got the attractive guy best friend who's not interested in his girl best friend. But the girl is interested in him and that's all there is to it. On top of that it's set in high school. Also, cliche. Kind of a weak plot...
It's good but hard to follow. Like when you said the part about Seth I was lost. You didn't really mention him to much and I'm still confused to who he is. Also work on more of a plot, yours is kind of weak. AND! Seth and hunter are identical twins at my school haha so all I can picture is them it's sorta disturbing (their identical evil gingers who do drugs )
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