Light has gone

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Charlie-Bush (01), Aug 16, 2012.

  1. UPDATE CHARLIE FOR GOD SAKES!
     
  2. Uhm ohk here we go..

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    As I'm running down this alley I hear more fires starts to erupt behind me. I starts to freak out a little but when I hear the sirens I sigh in relief. That's when I heard him.

    "Do not let her escape!" He said behind me. I hear the men start running towards me and that's when I slip. I fall to the ground and scrap up my knees. When I get up I felt a hand push me in the middle of my shoulder blades and I go down again.

    I start screaming hoping the police hear but then someone is on top of me! I start squirming and screaming and I feel hands press against my mouth and someone whisper in my ear. " You do not scream unless I tell you to got that?" He lets go of my mouth and I scream again. He sighed. "Shut her lights out for a while."

    He stands up and gets off me and I make a break for. I didn't get five steps before more than one set of hands grabbed me and started hitting me. One came to my stomach and I doubled over that's when they hit my back again. As I lay on the ground breathing heavy I think of how short of happiness I had in my life.

    Then I see a foot and next I know I feel it connect with my head and I see black. Nothing by black. It's weighing me down, I can't breathe. I fight as long as I can but I know it's all over so I take in the inevitable.

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    It's short but uhm Im going to upgrade more in a couple minutes
     
  3. OMG!!!!! Update!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  4. Lol thnx ill upgrade after I'm done with a soccer game.
     
  5. Bump!! Ok sure! Good luck for the soccer/football
     
  6. We lost and now I can't talk cause I got kicked In my throat and my leg got kicked too:(
     
  7. Ouch! I'm sure you'll win next time!!
     
  8. Ouch! Sorry to hear
     
  9. So I'm goin to update right now.

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    Alex POV

    Every fist, every kick that contacted her body I flinched. I know I shouldn't have a weak heart in this game but I can't help it. I have this unbearable need to protect her. She's like a drug.

    They were still hitting we when she was out and that's when I finally stepped in. "Hey stop! STOP!" When I got their attention I spoke as calmly as I could.

    "Everyone go get the cars and ill meet you." Everyone had left and now it's just me and her. I turned her over onto her back and looked at how hurt she was.

    Her eye was swollen shut and her nose bleeding. Her arm was at an wierd angle and when I looked at her stomach it looked like ribs were broken. "Dammit!" I muttered. It was never my idea for her to become this hurt.

    I picked her up as easily as I can and I ran to my car. I set her down on the seat with her head in my lap. It took about 20 minutes to finally get to our hideout and there is when I put on a different face. One of a cruel mean guy.

    I carried her in and set her on the bed but tied her up so she couldn't go anywhere when, or if she woke up. I left the room and locked the door then called out to everyone. "No one! And I mean no one goes into this room. Got it?" I heard several yeses and a lot grumbling. Aw well you can't make everyone happy.

    One of my friends came over to me. " Hey you look more different. Even when the guys were hitting that chick, you looked pained. You don't like her do you?" Mark asked me. He's the more sane one, he's totally against fighting and he helps everyone.

    I scoffed " Me? Liking her? You must out of your mind!" I put my head down and stomped away before I could hear his last remark and I will regret that later...

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    That's my update! Keep with me and you'll see what his remark was
     
  10. Suspense!
     
  11. Omg!! Update before I cry!!
     
  12. No Jack? Did you forget he was in this story?
     
  13. Jack no I didn't forget haha he wasn't in that one!!!
     
  14. Update!!!!!!!!!!
     
  15.  don't let me kill the chicken! Update instead!
     
  16. When are you going to update?