Chapter 1 I was on my way home from Meade High School when someone on the bus had started to get sick. I looked over at the guy and saw that he was coughing up blood and his skin had started to turn pale. There was commotion as several students were shrieking and crying over their dying friend. When the bus driver stopped the bus at the stop, she got up and walked over to the student. But it had gotten worse, foam had started coming out of his mouth as his eyes rolled in the back of his head. When she was about to shake him, he suddenly leaped on her biting her neck ripping the flesh off, making her choke up blood and bleed to death. My eyes widen at the scene before me, students had started running out of the bus screaming for their life, but luckily for me I was at the front so I was able to get out first. As I looked around I saw people running as the infected had started turning and blood everywhere on the streets as the infected ripped into the flesh of people. I had started running but stopped when I heard someone scream my name, I looked around but saw nobody I knew then the voice screamed up. When I looked up I saw my whole family in a helicopter hovering away, the officer screamed, "Were sorry but there's just not enough room! Go to your house and we'll get you when we can!" before throwing a small bag at me. I opened the bag and saw a handgun, a full magazine, a box of ammo, a knife and a belt to hold everything. I put the belt around my waist and started putting my items away except my handgun and magazine, I put the magazine in and cocked it as my mom screamed, "She doesn't know how to use that thing!" An infected had saw me and smiled a bloody smile before starting to walk towards me, I pointed at it then pulled the trigger and watched as the bullet went straight through his head blood squirting everywhere. The officer watched amazed before saying, "She'll be fine, Raquel get to your house now!" I nod then watched as the helicopter hovered away. While I wasn't paying attention, an infected suddenly leaped on me knocking me down and making my gun fly out of my hand. I tried pushing him off but it was to strong, I turned my head and saw my gun only a few inches away leaving me two options. Either trying my knife or reaching for my gun, as I reached for my gun the infected had started inching closer and closer to me. I shut my eyes and screamed thinking this is the end of my life that I'm never gonna see my family again or live on my life. I waited for it to bite my flesh and rip it off but it never came, I opened my eyes slowly and saw a guy around my age with blond hair and blue eyes holding out his hand. I held his hand tightly as he helped me up, I nodded a thanks then picked up my gun putting it in my holster. Another boy around my age came with brown hair and brown eyes came running up to us saying, "Phew good thing we came in time or else you would have been torn apart." I giggled and said, "Yeah." The blonde dude said, "I'm Tyler and thats Ricky. And you are?" I said, "I'm Raquel and we better get to my house. It's not safe out here." They both nodded and started walking behind me, I turned around and saw a horde of infected sprinting towards us. "Run!" I screamed before running off to the house and unlocking it, they ran inside and slammed the door shut locking it. I locked the garage door before walking upstairs with the two trailing behind, as I got to the dining room a shot was a made and a scream was heard. Tyler caught me before I fell passing out leaving Ricky to shoot the unknown figure in the head. ~ Well that's it for chapter 1, tell me what you think ~
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Chapter 2 When I woke up, I saw that I was laying down on the couch, two figures walked downstairs and said, "Your awake." I nodded and sat up but cried out wincing at the pain in my left shoulder. Another figure except smaller walked downstairs, I grabbed my Beretta and aimed at them saying, "Who are you?" Tyler and Ricky slapped their foreheads realizing their mistake of not checking everywhere. The figure started crying, I then realized that it was a little girl so I got up ignoring the pain and walked over to her. The little girl cried more and backed away against the wall saying, "Don't hurt me please." I shook my head and said softly, "No sweetie we aren't gonna hurt you." putting my gun back in the holster. The little girl looked up before wrapping her tiny arms around my neck, I wince but hug her back saying, "What's your name sweetie?" She says, "Rosemary but Rose for short and I'm 6." I smile and say, "Pretty name Rose and how did you get here?" She thinks before saying, "My daddy brought me here but got bit when trying to close the door. He told me to hide so I did." I nod then look at the boys, Tyler nods then dragged the body to the window while Ricky opened it and throws the body out. Rose then got out of my arms and walked over to the window, the figure stands up and turns looking at her smiling a bloody smile. I walk over to her as she begins crying she says, "Goodbye daddy." When I woke up, I saw that I had fallen asleep on the couch with Rose snuggled in my arms. I smiled and played with her hair softly, Tyler spoke up saying, "You thinking of adopting her after all of this is over?" I shrug and say, "I don't know yet. Her mom may still be alive." Tyler nodded as Ricky groaned indicting that he woke up, I giggled and saw Rose rubbing her eyes waking up also. I heard a scream coming from outside and got up taking my gun out, Ricky went over to Rose and said, "Shh it's alright.." Tyler ran downstairs with me trailing behind, I opened the door and saw a girl my age running from two zombies. Ricky came downstairs and said, "I'll open the door when you come back, go!" pushing us both out before closing the door. We both had started running towards the girl, Tyler distracted the infected while I ran over to the girl grabbing her arm pulling her away. The girl screamed saying, "Get your hands off of me!" before slapping me then pushing me to the ground. She then ran over to Tyler while I rubbed my cheek before getting up and going to the other two. "What the hell was that for!" I say when I get there, she smirks and says, "Oops I thought you were a zombie, by your looks, you do look like one." I clench my fist and start walking back with the girl and Tyler trailing behind. Ricky opens the door and I run upstairs seeing Rose waiting for me smiling. All I hear is Ricky say, "What's wrong with her?" next Tyler saying, "I'll tell you later." and finally the girl purring and saying, "Hey cuties."
Chapter 3 A few days later we decided to move on and look for a safer spot cause the horde has been banging on the door nonstop and we don't know how much longer that will hold. Before leaving we checked our ammo and all our supplies, Ricky checked to see if the coast was clear. I walked upstairs to get Tyler and Ashley but found them nude in my parents bedroom, I felt broken and said, "What the fuck do you think your doing! We gotta fucking go!" before going downstairs. Tyler said, "Oh shit." while Ashley said, "So what?" with a dirty smile. I pick up Rose and walk downstairs to Ricky getting ready, the other two came downstairs 10 minutes later with messy hair. Ricky rolled his eyes and said, "You guys ready?" looking at all of us. We all nodded, Ricky nodded then opened the back door slowly walking out and looking around, I picked up Rose and followed while Ashley was next then Tyler taking end. While we were walking Ashley stopped to tie her shoes, she then saw this attractive guy walking out the house. The dude saw her making his way towards her, she grinned and placed her hand on her hips waiting. The guy had turned out to be an infected and before she could scream for help the zombie bit deep in her chest ripping the flesh off. I turned around and my eyes widen, the boys turned around and saw an infected ripping and tearing up Ashley hungrily. Next thing we saw was a horde of zombies sprinting towards us, "Run!!" I screamed before taking off. The other two followed with no hesitation, several of the infected stopped to munch on Ashley while the rest had kept chasing us moaning and groaning hungrily. As we ran we noticed two people up ahead come out of a gun shop with assault rifles yelling at us to get inside while they were shooting at the infected. I nodded and ran towards the gun shop with the other two trailing behind, when we got there all of us ran inside closing the door and barricading it. "Are you guys alright? Anyone bit?" A guy with black hair and light brown eyes asked. We all nodded and said, "No none of us got bit." The guy nodded and said, "I'm Jay and that's Miranda." We all waved and I said, "I'm Raquel, that's Ricky, Tyler and Rosemary." pointing at the individuals. The two nodded, I looked out the barricaded window and saw that it was quiet outside with no infected anywhere. "Well we should all get some rest. Two of us are gonna patrol later on tonight." We all nodded and laid down on the floor, I put Rose in my arms and we both fell asleep. Someone shook me gently telling me to wake up, I opened my eyes slowly seeing Jay. I laid Rosemary down slowly before getting up, I looked out the window while Jay did the same. "Jay look there's a squad and some survivors." My eyes then widen as I saw the officers shoot the survivors running towards them, I squinted my eyes and read, "Punishers" on their uniforms. Jay looked at me and said, "There's a squad out there killing any survivors left." I nodded and said, "I know and we gotta get prepared."
When everyone had woken up, Jay and I told them about the Punishers out to kill us. Everyone stood there shocked and so confuse, "Why are they trying to kill us!" Ricky said throwing his hands in the air angrily. I ignored him and went to check up on Rose while Tyler said, "Dude none of us knows why yet calm down." Miranda trembled and said, "What are we going to do then? We can't stand around waiting to get killed." Jay held her in his arms saying, "Were not gonna stand around, were gonna find a refugee site." I stood up holding Rose saying, "That's exactly what were gonna do. We're leaving right now it's not safe grab all the guns and ammunition we need." Tyler grabbed my shoulder saying, "You really think right now is a good time to start moving?" Rose shrieked seeing the color on my face drain, Tyler and Ricky gasped as they saw Rose slipped out of my grasp as I fell back. Tyler caught Rose while Ricky held me in his arms gently, Jay looked at them saying, "What just happened?" Miranda walked over to me checking my head saying, "Oh no she's got a fever." Jay took out his Kimber Custom pistol aiming it at me saying, "She's infected get away." Ricky held me tighter pulling out his P226 E2 aiming it at Jay saying, "No she's not she's just worn out." When Jay took a step closer the click of a loaded gun was aimed at his head, Tyler had his finger on the trigger saying, "She's just tired, and if you dare shoot anyone of us you'll be dead in a second." I ended up passing out before seeing what had happened next. I couldn't believe that both of them were falling for me and I realized that I'm falling for them both also. But which shocked me the worst was that they both promised each other that if anything happened to them that they wanted the other to take care of me. I opened my eyes slowly and looked around seeing Jay and Miranda getting the guns and ammunition while the other two is on patrol. I got up slowly and went over to the other two, I wrapped my arms around Ricky from behind saying softly, "What time is it?" Tyler tensed up seeing us then said, "It's around 11 am we're gonna move in a few minutes." I sighed and put my face in his back, Ricky sighed softly closing his eyes. Tyler clenched his fist and looked away from us, I let go of Ricky making him open his eyes and smile. I then walked over to Tyler getting in front of him then wrapping my arms around him, he tensed a lil but sighed softly putting his chin on top of my head. I laid my head on his chest closing my eyes saying, "You both are so warm." Both of them chuckled and nodded, I giggled softly and let go of him walking over to Rose. Jay walked over to me handing me a spare Beretta already loaded and a box of ammunition, I did a small smile taking it saying, "Thanks." He nodded giving a smile then walked over to Miranda, the other two had started to reload their guns and loaded bullets in their magazines. I put my spare in my holster then cocked the other aiming, Rose woke up and went by my side gripping my pants. Jay looked at all of us handing the duffle bags to the other guys saying, "This is it, let's go."
As I looked around I saw no one not even the infected, Tyler stopped saying, "Something doesn't feel right." We all nodded, Rose then whimpered saying, "Found them." pointing to the big building. As we looked over there we saw zombies coming from all directions, I cursed and said, "It's an ambush. We better run for it." Jay nodded and said, "Shoot the ones only close to you. Go!!" I picked up Rose and started running behind all the others, Tyler ended up getting separated from the group, Miranda saw the look of my face and took Rose from me saying go. I ran over to Tyler and saw one of the Punishers aiming at him, I jumped pushing him out of the way letting the bullet graze over my cheek. I aimed and shot the member in the arm making him fall back in pain, several zombies saw him and sprinted towards him. I closed my eyes hearing the screaming of him as the infected had started to tear him apart, I then got up and started running to him, "What the fuck is she doing!!" I heard everyone else scream. I shot the infected's sprinting towards me straight in the head running past as they fell to the floor with a thud, I then took out my Ka-Bar and threw it to the zombie in front of me in the forehead and smirked seeing it drop dead. I shot the remaining zombies tearing him and kneeled down, he looked up at me and said, "Shoot me please." I looked at his body seeing that half of his legs and arms were gone and bloody showing bones, I shivered and said, "Why are you trying to kill us?" He coughed up blood splattering my face saying, "O--Or-Orders we had no choice please." I reloaded my Beretta and stood up saying, " Is there a survival base or something." He nodded and said, "T-The highway was the last we saw others alive." Chapter 6 I nodded and said, "I'm sorry." before pulling the trigger ending his life. I reached down and ripped off his tag before walking back to the group, as I was walking back I heard moaning coming from behind. My eyes widen as I saw my best friend, Lyssette, with decaying skin and bloodshot eyes walking hungrily towards me. I trembled aiming my Beretta at her and backed away, "Shoot it! Hurry!" The others yelled. I trip and fell over laying on my back, she kept walking forward smiling a bloody smile moaning and groaning more. I backed away crying and screaming, "Stop! It's me! Yo--Your friend!" I then closed my eyes letting go of my Beretta and heard her footsteps coming closer and closer her moans and groans getting louder. Two gunshots were made and a thud of an infected was heard, I opened my eyes seeing the body on the floor with a small blood pool near the head. Ricky and Tyler were at my side in a second saying, "Raquel are you okay?" I looked up and jumped on Tyler wrapping my arms around him crying, Ricky growled a lil but stopped when receiving a glare from Tyler. He picked me up bridal style gently then got my Beretta before walking back to the others silently with Ricky tailing behind. I was put down gently and given my Beretta back, reloading my magazine silently while Jay yelled saying, "Why the fuck did you go back! You wasted your ammo!" I just kept looking down not saying anything, Tyler wrapped his arms around me saying, "Why? Why did you come after me?" I laid my head back against him and said, "I couldn't lose you yet, the both of you."