Forever

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by _Tron, Sep 29, 2012.

  1. This is for you Maximum Ride fans!

    Recently, the last book came out: Nevermore. But everyone knows that a story doesn't end there. It keeps going. So I am creating a Maximum Ride book called Forever. I'll post new chapters once I write them. But in the meantime...

    Chapter 1

    I'm not one for mushy feelings. So imagine how I felt at the end of the world. It wasn't as bad as you think. In fact, I was with the ones I loved (even if one was trying to kill the other).
    "Angel, are you getting anything?" Angel was sitting with her eyes closed on the edge of the cliff.
    "All the entrances are underwater and sealed off." I looked into the murky water. It surprised me that just a few minutes ago, I almost died. Well, that happens on a regular baises.
    "Any news from Jeb?" I asked her. We left him on the steps in Utah with four broken ribs.
    "I can't tell," she said. I looked into the sky. Shades of pink and yellow blended together. We've been everywhere from Ant-fricking-artica to Paris. But I have never seen something this beautiful.
    "It would be even more beautiful if the world wasn't destroyed," Angel said. I sighed and walked around. I decided to go check on Fang.
    Now, there is something you should know. This isn't the first of my books. The last one was like the eighth one. But Dylan thinks we should keep track of what's going on right now. So it didn't just end. The begging of the end has only begun.
     
  2. Fan fiction.

    James Patterson is the bomb
     
  3. It's nice! Just wrong section. Fan Fiction. 

    And you got all the good story parts in
     
  4. Okay, that was kind of corny. I guess this whole thing is getting to me.

    I jumped off the cliff and spread my wings. Yes, I said 'wings'. If this is your fist time you've ever been on this ride, then you should know we all have wings.
    I wasn't sure if the gas in the air was toxic not. So I stayed low to the ground. I felt so powerful. I spotted something black in the distance. As I came closer I saw it was Fang.

    "How's it going?" I made a running landing. That wasn't the easiest thing to do.

    "Most of the trees are unsalvageable," he said. I looked and saw the trees burned up from the split.

    "Good thing Dylan got most of the kids into the caves. We almost didn't make it." He smiled his famous crooked smile at me. I felt my heart beat faster as I remember his last words to me; I love you Max.

    "What about the tree houses?" I asked.

    "All of them were destroyed," he said. This day just keeps getting better and better.

    "How about food. Are some plants not charred?" I was afraid to hear the answer.

    "Honestly, I haven't been far enough in to check." I sighed. I sat down and hugged myself. My mind didn't seem to comprehend the 'end of the world' at fist. But now it started to sink in.

    Fang sat down next to me and wrapped his arms around my shoulders.

    "We'll get through this. We're survivors," he whispered. I wanted to believe him but it didn't seem possible. I looked at him and felt tears in my eyes.

    "Don't, just not right now. They need you; I need you." He leaned on closer and kissed me.

    I don't know who long we sat there. I heard a cough and saw Dylan standing behind us. His hair was drenched in sweat.

    "Hope I'm not interrupting or anything, but I think I have an idea on how to get them out of the caves."
     
  5. i have no clue what this book is, but i love it now! Nice job
     
  6. I don't read books, I look at magazines 
     
  7. Put it in fan fiction where it belongs X.x
     
  8. I did put it in fan fiction.
     
  9. I read so much and I could never get into this series. Maybe I will someday.
     
  10. Ok, so I do have another one in fan fiction. But I'm going to post it here because some people are to lazy to go to ff.
     
  11. So the next chapter is on. But it's on the fan fiction one. Sorry guys.