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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Charlie-Bush (01), Aug 16, 2012.

  1. It needs more Jack
     
  2. Then read the story and!!!












    Tell me what you think!!
     
  3. Mansions, FBI! Drama! Good story Charlie
     
  4. Lol uhm thnx
     
  5. Now let's talk about the issue, Lack of Jack
    #LackJack
     
  6. I DEMAND MORE! MORE I SAY!!
     
  7. :3 This is what a story is.
     
  8. Ohkuhm I can't update today but uhm I'll try too tonight, but I have softball all day  uhm sorry and Thanx everyone for the support!
     
  9. I lied imma update but it's going to be short

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    Alex POV~

    Ive been having a blast stalking that girl in the mansion. She was so beautiful and I just loved it when we were close. I found out her name is Christi, we already knew her parents were FBI agents,that's why we picked this house.

    It was all for the money and the thrill. We found out about them just by stumbling into a conversation they were havin with a friend.

    Well I was watching Christi sleeping and she looked so peaceful. Some of the gang wants to kill her so thats another reason I'm watching her.

    There are 6 people in our gang right now. There's a skinny idiot guy named Jack, he's just in our gang cause he's good for a joke and someone to fight. There's a stockier guy his name is Billy,he's so thick headed you can him over the head with a hammer and it still wouldn't mess with his head.

    The other 4 are all related somehow. There names are Blake, Dylan, Toby, and Cameron. Blake has black hair and is really tall, he doesn't talk much though. Dylan has blonde hair and talks all the time we can't ever get him to shut up. Toby is a mix of the two, he talks sometime but not all the time, and he has brown hair. Cameron is the weird one, he has red hair and actually I never really saw him for more than a minute. He always disappears.

    One thing all of them have in common is that they are all mean and not afraid to do anything. I'm the leader of them. I am the brains of all the operations, I have brown hair and red eyes. My eyes are red cause when I had a really bad accident when I was younger.

    As I'm watching Christi I'm thinking about what Jack has been constantly saying. It gets on my nerves that he's right. Jack thinks we need to kill Christi,but she's just a little girl, we couldn't.

    I look outside and see the rest of my gang, I smile as I think about how much fun I am going to have playing with her. And yes it was me putting all those notes. I wasn't lying either about someone paying for her telling.

    Thinking of all the ways I could mess with her is the most fun I've ever had. We could even use her as ransom I guess but what fun would that be.

    I wrote another letter an placed it beside her. I laughed as I walked downstairs and out the door to my gang. We ran to our hiding place and there is where I fell into a happy sleep dreaming of Christi.

    The note read: " You are beautiful when you sleep, looks like I have to fix that."
     
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    My story and the POV was in the mystery guy in case tall didn't know hehe sorry if I made mistakes! And hope you like this POV! Darn it I said it again well here you go!!
     
  11. JACK IS AMAZING!!!
     
  12. Lol yea right I just put your name just to shut your mouth

    I'll update soon
     
  13. I'm going to update. Srry it took so long

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    Christi POV

    I woke with another note. I didn't even read it,I just threw it into my little trash ben in my room. I got dressed in my huge closet into black heel and a cherry red dress.

    Closing my closet I noticed myself in the mirror on the door. As I stopped to look at myself I noticed how beautiful I actually could look if I tried.

    "Well I can't dwell on things." I sighed and headed downstairs. I decided not to eat anything cause I didn't want to get the dress dirty. On the table though was a note from my parents.

    "Dear Christi,

    As you probably know your mother and I aren't home. There's some talk of a terrorist attack going,so we will be away for about a week.

    Love, your dad and mother."

    I read the letter once and sighed. Another week without them. I decided to go out into town. I thought what harm can go into that.

    Well I'm walking in the town. It's like a mall actually, it looks so cool. I decided to go to Macies first and there I got a lot of purses. Next I went to JC Pennies and there I just bought a could diamond earrings.

    I walk past this alleyway and I notice a couple guys start following me. I got scared a little and started walking a little faster. I turned a corner and they disappeared which I was grateful but I see another note.

    "Oh for the love of god!" I opened the note and it said time for payback. I was confused, payback? Then it hit me. I told my parents about the guy.

    After I came to that conclusion a fire started in one of the stores, then another one. And soon 5 fires were going. I stood shocked until a voice said behind me.

    "Beautiful isn't." I jumped and turned. I started backing up slowly.

    "What do you want?" He darted laughing and several guys came behind him.

    "Why if I told you that then it wouldn't be a surprise." He stopped laughing and snapped his fingers. "Get her."

    I started running but my heels was slowing me up. But at lead I got a head start. They were coming closer and closer. The fires were going out of control. This isn't what I had in mind for a day in the town.

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    Hmmm will they catch her? I don't know find out next update! But I'll let you linger on this question. She was taught to run her while life, did her adopted parents know something? Is that why the fi's are after her? Or was it really just a coincident?
    NEXT UPdATE YOU WILL SEE!!
     
  14. BUMP! Let me know when you update :)
     
  15. I going to update this soon!
     
  16. Ohk I have writers block right now... Give me a couple hours and ill figure it out.
     
  17. Really cool. You have to update.