Hiding Behind Anything She Can Find

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Ani-MAL-, Sep 25, 2012.

  1. Hey lovelies! Yes I know another story but I'm sorry ill keep up with this one!

    I've never felt more attached to this story! It is a true story and yes this actually happened and it will have an ending!

    Anyways please comment or give critiques! I really am trying to get better with my writing! 

    So read it please? 


    Joyous laughter. Angelic smiles. Shining eyes.

    WRONG.

    No one could actually be enjoying this life. This.. Pitiful, cruel world. How could they even bear to smile?

    I cringed the thought away as I lifted up my loose sleeve. Every time I do this.. It just becomes heavier.

    My breaths became sharp and quick.

    It was just another day. Another day I couldn't get through by myself.

    I closed my eyes and a smile came upon my face as I felt the cold blade against my warm pale skin.


    Yes this is short I KNOW! But tell me what you think okay lovelies?

    DJ
     
  2. Awh thank you 
     
  3. Ill update again tonight and tell me if you want me to wall you when I do! 
     
  4. Bump! Good so far! Wall me when you update please!
     
  5. Thank you 
     
  6. Bump!! It's really good!!
     
  7. Wellllllll then  if I get 3 comments on this ill update tomorrow 

    Night lovelies
     
  8. Update! Pretty cool.