Scarborough Fair

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by NicoleCreed, Aug 27, 2012.

  1. Hey guys, this is a story that I am writing. Please tell me if it is good.

    It was on the eve of my fifteenth birthday that it happened. The month was November. The year, 1989. I was lying half-asleep by my window, watching the moon. It was particularly cool that night. Quite to my liking but, it was a strange wind, like something foreign, and I thought I could make out the faint sound of a train in the distance. It was strange because trains haven't come through this town in years. You see, I lived in Salina, Oklahoma, a small town where nothing very interesting ever happened. Until that fall, many years ago.
     
  2. Pretty good start!!! One bit of advice: Make your updates a little longer. Great job!!
     
  3. Well, it would've been longer but that's just a small taste, I want to know what people think before putting more.
     
  4. I see… I think it's excellent!!
     
  5. I luvvvvvvvvvv it
     
  6. So can I just reply on this to right the rest or do I need to make another thing?
     
  7. You can just reply to this. It's called an update… not sure if you know or not
     
  8. Yay nicole keep going
     
  9. Scarborough Fair as in the poem? There's a book about that... It was really good
     
  10. ONE WORD......






























    BUMP!
     
  11. BUMP!!!!!!!!!!!!!