The Lonely Girl, Dya

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *ViCCi (02), Sep 22, 2012.

  1.  Introduction 

    This lonely girl from a strange old town that no one has ever heard of moved to a really buzzing, modern and busy city. Everyone in her school despised her for her nerdy and old-fashioned attitude/ ways. But no one knew her secret that she was actually the number 1 hit singer on the boards...

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    Day 1

    Dya arrived at her school, not knowing what was in front of her. The sophisticated, snobby girls that thought they looked like Kim Kardashian, sticking their noses up in the air.

    A few minutes later, a girl that was tall, wearing sparkly lip gloss and extremely high heels, walked up to her. "What's your name, Miss Nerdy Girl?" she asked. Some girls, supposedly her friends, laughed. Dya felt like a small ant, but she replied "Dya".
    "That's a cool name, but that doesn't change the fact that you're a lame person," the tall girl said. "My name is Kirsty, by the way".
    Dya ignored her insult, and headed to her first class which was English. She sat down at the back, hoping not many people in this big school were rude and people with big heads. Many people took their seat, but only two or three spoke to her, yet they were also those kind of people- the rude type.

    Recess

    Dya bought a bowl of curry chicken noodle and went to sit at a table that had only a girl that was alone. "Hi there, my name is Dya," Dya said with a friendly smile. "What's your name?"
    "My name is Angel, nice to meet you, Dya," Angel replied shyly and softly.
    "Mind if I sit here?" Dya asked politely.
    "Sure," Angel gestured to the seat beside her.

    When they were eating, Dya and Angel became good friends. Angel told Dya that this school was full of snobs. "It wasn't like that at my old school," Dya had remarked. "Too bad but that's the environment in this school," Angel said.

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    Time to go back home

    Dya waited for her bodyguard, Jones, at the back of the school for her limousine to arrive. She didn't want anyone to know that she was a star, because then people would act differently and not like her for her attitude— but for her fame. That was what Dya hated, when people at her old school found out about the truth about her two years ago, and this was why Dya had changed schools.

    Soon, the limousine arrived. Dya climbed in the car and Jones shut the door. "How was the first day of school, D?" Jones asked. D was Jones' nickname for Dya. "Okay, I guess. I made a new friend," Dya replied as the car zoomed away from the school swiftly.
    "Does anyone know the truth about you yet?" Jones said softly. "No, I'm planning to hide it as long as possible."

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    That's all for today, I hope you enjoy it!  Tell me on how I can improve! 

    ViCCi
     
  2. More details.  Very interesting. Please do go on.
     
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