Forbidden Love: Torn Apart 

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Ani-MAL-, Sep 14, 2012.

  1. -.- 2 updates!
     
  2. okay fine 2updates tomorrow!
     
  3. Yay! Thank you! Now get your rest hun!
     
  4. Update! Bump! When you have updated please let me know :)
     
  5. Be careful in switching from present to past tense and vice versa. Stick to one. 
     
  6. thanks andj !!
     
  7. here you go.. update #1 LOVELIES 


    After about 15 minutes I finally arrived home. Confusion swept over my face as I saw an unfamiliar car in the driveway.

    I slowly and quietly opened the door. I stepped inside and shut the door behind me. Something didn't feel right. I checked in the kitchen, but It was the same as how I had left it in the morning.

    I crawled into the living room but NOTHING.

    I let out an exasperated sigh and lay on the couch. That's when I heard IT.

    GIGGLING.

    hold up... giggling?!

    I ran upstairs and burst into my dads room. there was a woman on his bed.....

    We all let terrified screams and I sprinted back downstairs to the kitchen.

    'He wouldn't do this', I said to myself. 'He wouldn't be with someone...'

    I couldn't stop pacing. it was the only thing keeping me from falling over. Maybe my eyes had deceived me!

    After a while my dad and the woman finally came down.

    He put a hand on my shoulder and sighed. My dad had guilt written all over his face. I shook my head trying to avoid the truth and what was about to come next.

    "Aly... this is Charlotte.. my fiancée."

    I definitely was NOT expecting that.

    Before I could say anything, everything turned black.


    ALRIGHT GUYS COMMENT AND I TAKE CRITIQUES tell me if you want me to wall you when I have updates  and tel others to read of you like it.

    THANK TARRU FOR THIS! she kinda made me ._.

    anyways another update coming tonight!

    DJ
     
  8. next update in 2hrs maybe. 
     
  9. yeah I'm not gonna update if no one reads lol
     
  10. WOOP WOOP! BUMP! And boo yah!