she lives on in the devils school

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *izzy_wizzy (01), Sep 20, 2012.

  1. This is just a short story but I hope you enjoy it! It's just a little thing I thought off!
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    I'm just trying to do my best! These kids need help and support. The justice system is bad, we are beaten, bruised and battered for what I believe in! I will NEVER give up.

    Down the science hall, that little door, go through then follow the stair case. Enter the office, speak your name, they let you through. Follow the corridor, down through the hatch, pass that little room, into the chamber, sit on a chair, they know what they are doing. Wait till your called, enter the room, have the meeting. Wait for your doom!
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    "hello class, it's time for the meeting... So line up" I said as my class shamefully lined up.

    "now remember, no cheek, no banter, don't speak until spoken too... Yes?" I tried to explain.

    "yes miss" they all replied as I lead them down the corridor.

    The bright colours are an illusion to what goes on in the Walls. Although the appearance is happy, they people are not.

    Before the school was built, it was a church. In 1994, the church was burned down. The fire started in a hidden room, the flame came from a young girl being burned alive.

    Her father was unknown, in this little town, that means he was the devil. 42 bodies were found in that small room, only one was actually being killed.

    There was one survivor, he escaped... It's said that the girl survived and was treated in a hidden hospital, somewhere in the foundations of this town.

    Do you believe in legends?
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    We approached the science hall...

    Down the science hall, that little door, go through then follow the stair case. Enter the office, speak your name, they let you through. Follow the corridor, down through the hatch, pass that little room, into the chamber, sit on a chair, they know what they are doing. Wait till your called, enter the room, have the meeting. Wait for your doom!

    The first name was called,
    Sally Edwards, after ten minutes she came out, she had been injected and burned.

    Thomas Riley, he came out, no injuries.

    Judy clipson, she came out crying, she had been raped.

    Hannah Emerson, she didn't come out.

    After 3 hours, all the boys and girls got sent back except Hannah. Everyone was ok except, the 2 girls before Hannah.

    My name was called out "miss ederby"

    I knew what was going to happen, I get burned and stabbed as they mock me and taunt me then...

    I returned to the class, I collapsed on the floor as blood poured from my mouth.

    It was 2:20 pm, hannah still wasn't back. The school got hotter and hotter, I went outside for water when I noticed... THE SCHOOL WAS ON FIRE!

    I managed to get my class out, I was badly injured, I couldn't walk, I gave up, I fell to the floor as the flames engulfed me.

    42 people died in that fire, the school was burnt down. The body of a Young girl was found in a hidden room. The fire started from her sacrifice.

    Sound familiar? Can you crack the case?
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    Hope you all enjoyed it!
     
  2. It will happen to everything on that are forever?