it's only a dream

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Curvy_Babe, Sep 19, 2012.

  1. I sit alone reading my book. As I flip to the next page I notice an old torn note in the center. I unfold the note to find the words, come find me. I gently look up and watch the crowd around me. No movement of who's note it might be. I simply recover to my feet and walk to a sign with another note taped to the center. I read it and follow where it tells me to go. At the end of the notes I see a tall handsome boy with beautiful blue ocean filled eyes. I smile and blush as I look at him. I stumble to catch my words "I-I remember you," I say in a shaken voice. He smiles and I go breathless. His teeth were as shiny as a white pearl. I couldn't move almost as if in a glaze. Finally he spoke. His voice was beautiful, soft and gentle. "My name is Brendan," he says in the sexiest voice I've ever heard. I feel in love at first sight. His voice continued to put me in a gaze. Then a loud noise alerts me from behind me. I realize it's only a dream...
     
  2. DIRECTED BY M NIGHT SHALAMALAMADINGDONG


    just wanted to say that.
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  3. Uh thanks not really helping to the person who didn't read and thank you to the rest:)
     
  4. It's an ok start hopefully it will get better
     
  5. Kay, I read it.

    Doesn't seem like my kind of story, but it's well written.
     
  6. I want it to continue-uses mind control- you will update and use some more description, but mostly update
     
  7. I will but not right now:): thanks guys glad y'all like it:);
     
  8. It's bout my boy to hehehe:):
     
  9. Ohmyholytomato  Ish shoo good. Nuff Said.
     
  10. BUMP! PLEASE UPDATE AND LET ME KNOW :)
     
  11. Bout to post a new story
     
  12. Brendan P.O.V
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    I sit next to the pretty girl every day in math she never looks up from her books. The teacher, Mr.Morgan even try's calling on her to work out a problem but she always ignores. I finally get her attention and ask for her help on a problem as her soft skin brushes against my fingers. I feel the urge to hug her but I stay quite and still I feel my heart beating but grow scared when I fear she can hear. I look at Mr. Morgan as he looks shocked that the mystery girl has talked.
    I move my hand so she can see better a it touches her leg by mistake. I look into her eyes and see the hate filling her green eyes. I begin to wonder why she never talks in class or anything. Then my moment of light becomes darken as the bells ring. I stay seated watching her walk out the class room with out even a word.
     
  13. Ill update more later