Howdy ya'll! I have decided to start a new story, but I was unable to think of a title for it. Yes, you might think it is a cliché teenage love story at first, but trust me... It's not. (well we'll see how it goes maybe it is maybe it's not :/) please leave comments and criticism! Keep in mind I'm a little rusty :/ I will begin updates... When i feel like it...
Not my style... Well actually it is but I really like where this story is going so far in my plans and such.
BEFORE I START UPDATES I WANT YOU TO KNOW THAT I DONT CARE IF YOU DONT LIKE MY STORY!!!!!!! Please keep hurtful comments to yourself. I do accept criticism but i do not accept rudeness! All readers displaying rude or hurtful behaviors will be asked to leave my thread... Lawlz i sound like a teacher...
Preview: One word. Hatred. That's all I feel for him. That perfect little son of a bitch. That's what he is. Everyone loves Ryan. Of course they do. Why wouldn't they? He is athletic, and good looking. Is that all that matters in this damn school? What about brains? What about talent? No one even gives a second thought about me. I might as well be invisible. Sorry its short but its just a little preview... Trust me it will get MUCH better.
Shannon's POV: There he was. Flirting in the hallways with ten girls at a time. It's disgusting. Here I am trying to get to class, but I can't get through, because the hallway is completely blocked. RIIIINNNNNNNNGGGGG I run to get to my next class. "Shannon," Ms. Bergmier says, "Glad you could join us." I groan, and take my seat in the back. Science is my WORST subject. Who cares about all that stuff anyway? Its ridiculous! Of course Ryan is a whiz kid when it comes to science. Who would have thought that there was a brain in that big head of his. "Shannon." I hear my named called and I look up. "Can you tell us what the scientific method is?" Ms. Bergmier smirks. I clear my throat. "No," I mumble. Ryan rolls his eyes and raises his hand. He answers perfectly and all the girls go crazy. Who would have thought that girls could get so excited over science... <><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><> ok this is the first official update! Please tell me what you think!
I thought… it was AMAZING. If I had any criticism, I would say add a little more detail. You can never have enough of that =) What does she look like? What does he look like? What does the surroundings look like? But it was a fantastic update!!!