No one knows the forgotten because well she's forgotten she met a guy the guy dumped her no she roams helplessly in the middle of nowhere can anyone help her? No!
And she sings really depressing songs for example "this lies are leading me astray it's to much for me to stay I don't wanna live this destiny it goes on endlessly" she kills wolfs with her bear hands all she does is walk and eat no sleep
*wolves *bare Use punctuation, grammar, capitalization, and write with a LOT more detail. We need to be able to picture the scene in our head, and I can't exactly do that. Please don't take this as insults… I'm trying to improve your writing.
That's criticism. This is not a story. Far fucking from it, actually. Please stop spamming forums with useless crap. :|