Yoru's pov : "i know you are really blond and that your true name is Dave. Why did you take Jake's name, really? To satesfy your brother?" i said to the man I earlyer called Jake. But his name was Dave. No denaying there. He sigh at me. "it was to cover Jake. You know that he has to be in the busyniss. But as you can see, he is ill...... And please let go of my hair." i grin. "cutt it." he only groun at me. As we enterd the house of Dirk and Dave i knowdes the diffrens. I have known them both since childhood.... But this is just wrong.... (comments plz.)
New data. Dave: The true Jake: (this is a chang I had to make. So last page. Take Jake and make it Dave)
Dirk's pov : I held Jakes hand. He was not awake but i needed this. Knowing that his heart was still beating in him. That he still was breathing. I love Him. And i do not wanna lose him. I used the other hand to touch his short, silky, black hair. What I wud do to make his beauteful green eyes open again. "Jake, please..... I love you... Come back to me. Wake up.." i whisperd almost. I just held his hand and wished the best. I looked up as i heard my littel bro, down stears. I exite the room and looked down. "Yoru Nox... Long time no see.." i said cold to the pair of dark blue eyes and white hair. That is Your.....
Dave's pov : Oh crap oh crap. Im done now. As i looked in the ice cold eyes of my brother (kinda ironyc, his eyes are orage) but still. I cud tell that he was annoyed. I swollowd as i feld Your's knife to my neck. "hand the girl over, Dirk!" yoru said coldly. Srsly, its becomeing more winter here then outside. All i can do now is watch my brother....
Dirk's pov: Great, just great. I was planding to let the girl go. But now i have to deal with this guy? Hell no! I dislike yoru big time. I and him had a nasty fight once. Kinda weird to see him without his lover and boyfriend Hikaru.
Dave's pov : I held my breath. Thy talked face to face for over an hour. In the end thy seem to have made a desl. Anyhow, yoru left with the girl. I giggeld a bit. She is so cute.
Dirk's pov : That son of a spider bitch!!! I hate Yoru for all he is wearth. He can trick anyone into what ever the fuck he wants. Love is the only thing that comes real to him, the rest is a game. Our deal was that he was gonna find a way to wake Jake up, if i only lat the girl go. Im so pissed!!!! If he lies now, then Im gonna cutt this wrist and throwedt!!
Dave's pov : I cant get her out of my head. Her pretty face is all over my mind. Am I srsly in love here. Aww, cmon: im Dave for god sake. The cool dude that makes girls tripping.... But she really stole my heart. Agi...
Yoru's pov : "Im really sorry!" i said to my boyfriend Hikaru. He looked at me with cold eyes. "Srsly, do you even care.... Or love me anymore? Or am I all old news?" What the hell? Where did that come from? "What makes you think that? I love you more then anything! Why is that so hard to belive?" I said, almost pissed. Hikaru looked at me, almost sad before giveing me a small smile. "I know you dont lie. You just cant lie about love." I cudent take it anymore. I took him and kisset him hungry. Small moans and gasped came out of him. He held into me and kissed back, hungry and Lustful. No way in hell Im gonna let him go. This is Love. (comments please)
Agi's pov : Okay, so the deal was that I was gonna find a way to wake this Jake up on. He is ill with the illness called "deep poisend sleep." its not easy but not imposebil. Okay..,, I take up some of the books I had. Hmmmm ........, oh! Here. That will take some time but Hei, it is a shoot. Now, lets start.
Agi's pov : Okay, so what I need is: sufferer blood phiikick sweat disaipil tears a mothers hair a soldiers fether from his/hers wings. a jokers blood And a drop of tear, blood and sweat from the victems loved one. Thats the list. (comments plz)
Ahhhh my eyes!! Grammatical mistakes everywhere!! Remeber to use spell check, and ALWAYS proof read. Also you can't do this > ,...