Gideon's Disgrace

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by satanictitanicGenny_, Sep 4, 2012.

  1. Looking forward to the next update  well bump
     
  2. Chapter four

    A slim figure slowly slid out of the tree. Both Liam and Sweeney started down her from her feet and up to the cloak that covered her face. The black dress hugged her figure well, and the crimson red cloak only revealed a few blonde curls and a pair of bright, brilliant, cat eyes. The tip of her pale nose was seen. Just barely the tip.

    Her nails appeared like claws, painted black and red. Her skin was almost as pale as Sweeney's. Maybe just as. A scowl escaped the female figure's mouth, disappearing and reappearing behind Liam, holding a dagger to his throat, grinning like the Cheshire Cat.

    "So, who are you two?" She smirked, tracing the knife along Liam's neck.
    "L-Liam"- he stammered, squeezing her arm. She froze, looking at him.
    "Liam." she nodded, the memory slowly coming back to her.
    She slipped the dagger away, and stepped up to inspect Sweeney.
    Liam grinned, nodding.

    "Go ahead, Bri."
    Brielle was Jane. This should be easy now, right?
    Brielle stepped up, looking up at Sweeney. Now she was 5'11. Her green eyes studied his pale complexion and face expression. He raised an eyebrow, snorting.

    Brielle leaned up, pressing her lips against his, relaxing. He kissed her back gently, sighing happily.
    End of Disgrace One
    Wish left Eleanor to her thing with Johanna and went fishing instead.
    He leaned down to the water, grabbing the fish.
    Eleanor and Johanna silently stalked him from a tree and Johanna whispered.
    "There he is, just go talk to him"-
    "Shhh." Eleanor hissed, covering Johanna's mouth, watching Wish jump into the lake. He popped out of the water, exhaling.
    "Hey pretty boy!" she snorted. "Hows the water?"
    Wish blinked, rubbing his eyes and turning around, leaning against a rock.
    "I don't know, why don't you come tell me? I'm numb.." he grinned.
    Eleanor ran, jumping in. As she popped out of the water, she sighed.
    "It's nice."

    Wish got a few ideas, grinning.
    "Hey Eleanor, come here.."
    "Hm?" she wondered, swimming to him.
    Wish pulled her close, their green eyes canceling each other out, and he brushed a few strands of her auburn hair away.
    "W-What"-
    "What's wrong Eleanor?" he smirked, lifting her chin.
    "L-Let me go."
    "No, I don't think I will.." Wish grinned, pressing his lips against hers.
     
  3. I have no ideavwjats going on. You lost me around chapter four. Bump anyway tho!
     
  4. It's a set of three disgraces.
    1.) is Jane.
    2.) is Wish
    3.) is Liam.
    They are all a disgrace to Gideon.
     
  5. Wha-?????? The only thing I understand about this is
    It's interesting
    It's a story.

    That's it.......
     
  6. BUMP
    Enjoying it 
     
  7. I was writing an update for a different story thoughh-
     
  8.  *Lemongrab voice* UNNAACCCEPPPTAABLLEEEE!
     
  9. Smh, let me pull myself together and write it while stalling-
     
  10. I don't have school today- HALLELUJAH-
     
  11. Holy shit, the unfairness-