Gideon's Disgrace

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by satanictitanicGenny_, Sep 4, 2012.

  1. I'm writing the update right now~
     
  2. You better be...
     
  3. this story is awesome!
     
  4. Frick, I'll update after/while I'm doing homework? D:
     
  5. Chapter Three

    "So who was that Wish boy?" Eleanor asked, yawning.
    "YOUR SAVIOR, ELEANOR"- Johanna answered, throwing her arms in the air. Eleanor rolled her eyes like he didn't exist. Johanna's eyes caught a floating spot of glitter, and waved.
    "Hi Wish!"
    Wish appeared out of the glitter, and Eleanor ran away, flailing. Wish frowned, watching Eleanor run away.
    "What's wrong with her?"
    "She's running away from you."
    Wish rolled his eyes, mumbling,"Who spit in her bean curd?"
    He disappeared, reappearing in front of her.
    "Whatcha running away from?" he smirked.
    She shrieked, stopping to a halt in front of him.
    "Y-you"- she stammered, poking his chest.
    "I'm going to help you, regardless."
    "I don't care what Jo says, I don't need love."

    "You're scared, aren't you?.." he asked, floating upside down.
    "That's none of your b-business."
    "Certainly it is. It can make my job somewhat easier and ease up the world pain."
    "World pain?"
    "If their are bad people that hurt you, I don't have a problem getting rid of them. But I still need to check them and all that fancy shit."
    "Wow. So helpful?" Eleanor snorted, stretching.
    "Completely." said Wish, chirping and disappearing in glitter confetti.
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    Jane sighed, being dragged along with Curse to go get slaughtered.
    Sweeney stared at the ground and Liam coughed to make it less awkward.
    "You didn't mean to bite her, did you?" Liam asked, looking up at the sky.
    "No.. Of course not. I didn't intend to bite Jane.."
    "Do you even have any feelings towards her?!" Liam suddenly barked.
    "Godamn kid, of course I do! I admitted it too!"
    Liam blinked.
    "I said I did love her, and you have to believe me.. She's different.."
    "What exactly is different?"
    "She's just.. Amazing.. In so many ways. Her personality makes it appear like she doesn't need to do anything to make friends or anything. And"-
    Liam twitched, hearing a rustle.
    "The fuck was that?" Sweeney asked, looking up.
    "It was a squirrel." Liam said, blinking.
    "Creepy ass squirrel then.."

    There was another rustle, except it came from the trees behind them.
    "What in the actual fuck.."
    They turned around, looking at the tree. There were some shaded spots, but a pair of emerald green eyes stood out...
     
  6. they r being watched! Creepy!
     
  7. (= Writing the next update
     
  8. BUMP!! LET ME KNOW WHEN YOU UPDATED!!
     
  9. BUMP.. love it! 
     
  10. I will notify, thank you. Now I must finish-
     
  11. I fell over my own feet yesterday-
     
  12. I do that plenty-
     
  13. I WAS PANICKING BECAUSE MY WRIST FELT BEOKEN AGAIN-
     
  14. But it's all good. XD
     
  15. Well, you're okay, that's good-
     
  16. UPDATE 
    BUMP...