Away....

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -SBO-GracieMonster, Sep 2, 2012.

  1. Gracie ...this just ...





    AMAZING !


    Bump
     
  2. I love it there's nothing to criticize. Great job I would also like you to wall me when you update.
     
  3. WONDERFUL!!!! Bump!!!
     
  4. (keep up this work don't become hateful of someone says something negative don't become like me)
     
  5. Absolutely perfect
     
  6. Thank You!
    I'll update as soon as I get some sleep ;D
     
  7. Away.
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    An original story by -SBO-GracieMonster

    Part 2 of Chapter 2:
    Lies.

    Marcus

    "So...what happened? Why were you in the woods dirty and without shoes?"
    I pawed at my ear as I watched Jasmine, waiting for an answer. No reply.
    "Do you need me to call your parents?"
    Nothing.
    "What's with all the scars?"
    Nada.
    I sighed frustratingly as I knew it was going to take quite a while to get something out of her.
    "Maybe...you could stay here for a few days..."
    Jasmine looked up at me, blinking.
    "Is that...OK?"
    She nodded nonresistant.
    There's been talk about Jasmine being abused by her parents but I know it isn't true. Gossip is almost 99.9% never relevant. Someone as fragile, sweet, warm and beautiful could never be abused. Never. It's just a rule.
    "You can stay here until tomorrow then I'll take you back to your parents, aye?"
    "NO!"
    She retaliated angrily.
    I've never seen Jasmine this furious. She's always been shy and kind. She would always hide in a way. Then it all came to me. The scars. The attitude. The appetite. The filth. The rumors are true. Jasmine must have ran away.

    Dear Readers,
    I'm sorry for the crappy update but I'm hella tired and I need sleep. ,_,
    Best,
    Grandpa
     
  8. BUMP !  This is awesome! 
     
  9. FANTASTIC!!! Bump!!!
     
  10. it's a great update lol girl what u talking about I love it bump
     
  11. Bump Gracie :3
     
  12. I'll update tomorrow 
     
  13. This is amazing 
     
  14. I know I have abandoned this story and im terribly sorry but no update will be posted in a while because of school and drama...Bleh...
     
  15. Bump. Still c: I love your writing.
     
  16. This is really good!!! 