I have written a story in quite a long time. So, this may not be my greatest writing ever, but hopefully you enjoy it. *********************************************** I sit here illuminated by darkness surrounding every corner. I squeeze my knees together hoping that this will secure me to sanity. Even though i know i'm partially gone already, but there is nothing i can do about that now. I just have to believe i wont fall back into the clouded horror inside my mind. My life hasn't always been a vivid battle between sanity, actually my life used to be quite pleasant for a girl my age. Nine Months Earlier. "Charlotte! Wake up!" A energetic voice blurts out to me. As i open my weary eyes, i gaze upon the overly cheerful girl in front of me. She has shoulder length caramel brown hair that is bone straight, emerald green eyes, and she is almost as tan as the people on Jersey Shore. "Wake up!! Your always sleeping!" She complains with a happy tone still ringing in her voice. "Okay! Im awake, Heather!" I blurt back to her. Heather is one of my closest friends and we have every class together. After my wake up call, Heather and I stroll down the hallway side by side to go to our next destination. If you compare Heather and I, you will notice that we look completely different, but we act some-what similar. I have long dark auburn hair that is usually in long curls, dark brown eyes that almost look black when you look at them, and unlike Heather I'm very pale. When we enter the Math classroom, i take my seat in the far back. The only reason i choose to sit there is for the peace and quiet, and the ability to sleep without getting caught. ----------------------------------- How is it so far? Tell me your opinions!
I luv the details and I'm terrible at grammar so idk if u did something wrong lol. I think longer posts would make the story better and hook the reader just a little bit more.