My my this is quite brilliant. All these details... Are absolutely amazing. When you described the beating scene, I could almost see it right in front of me. Just fabulous. I can't wait for the next update
The long awaited update to my story!! ------------ Chapter 2 As the nights went on between the first and second appointments, Landon’s yearning for Aurora grew, minute by minute he wanted to hold her and kiss her even more. He had to wait though, he couldn’t rush this, and things had to happen on their own. Sometimes they needed a little help but he didn’t want Aurora to think he was obsessing over her, even though that was exactly what he was doing. He couldn’t help but dream about her every night and sometimes day dreamed when he was supposed to be doing something important. He kept imagining her eyes looking into his with a love so deep, her hair falling in his face after a passionate night, her hands entwined in his own and her lips gently pressing against her own. She was everything he wanted, everything he needed, and everything he will get. He will get her, he saw it in his eyes when he would think about her, the need was so strong that he was willing to do anything to get her and keep her. After the nights of going insane in his motel room it was finally time for the next appointment. Landon decided that he would get ready and make himself look presentable. He gave his face a thorough shave and trimmed his unruly eyebrows to give them a manly and even sexy appearance. He put on a black button down shirt that was made of the finest silk money could buy and a pair of Calvin Klein blue jeans. He admired himself in the mirror, combed his hair and sprayed some cologne, not a lot to be overpowering but the perfect amount. He thought he was looking good and believed that Aurora would think so as well. He grabbed his keys off of the table and slid on a pair of brand new flip flops and walked out of his room. He drove to the office in his car, distracted by the thought that he was finally going to see Aurora again. His mind raced with the thoughts of him greeting her with a big hug and a kiss on the cheek but he knew that it would be inappropriate. He shook his head and walked into the office, Aurora was already waiting for him. Good God did she look gorgeous; it was almost like she made herself look even more gorgeous than she already was. Her hair was in tight curls that bounced closely to her smooth face and her eyes showed a small glint that Landon could get lost in. Her chest was revealing slightly in a tight, black button-down shirt that hugged her chest in all the right areas. Her legs stuck out of a grey pencil skirt that clung to her hips perfectly. She looked absolutely drop-dead gorgeous and he didn’t know how he would be able to focus on actually talking about anything important. All he could do was look at her body and he forced himself to look up at her and follow her into the tight, enclosed room where he would be a few inches away from her at most.
...I would enjoy this more if it wasn't a romance. You're obviously an excellent writer, but I have problems dealing with romance, my personal preference. But I do enjoy it somewhat, but the romance ruined it for me.
Silence and go read manga or something Quinn! I haven't seen you post anything positive yet! We all love the romance so go read something else.
Thanks for the feedback qinny, sorry if my story isn't good enough for you but I happen to love romance and will continue this how it is. thanks for reading
You obviously are checking the wrong stories. And I'm not going to say "I love it!" all the time if it's not true.