LOCKDOWN

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *AngelSweets (01), Sep 3, 2012.

  1. Im going to try and write again , Dont be mad if it sucks 
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    I keep my face blank as he looks at me. I don't show any emotions, because I know he'll use them against me. My mouth is set in a grimace, and my eyes stare straight back at his, refusing to back down. They made me sit on the floor, while he sat in a big, leather chair behind a metal table. They tried to make him looking imitating, too bad I'm not that easy to break.

    "What is the code?" He asked for the millionth time.
    "Why?" I ask back, keeping my voice flat and even. He slammed his fist on the table and stood up.
    "Because I want to know!"He yelled, his face turning red with rage. I simply looked at him for a while, showing him I wasn't scared.
    "You seem to have angry issues, thats not a good thing" I say calmly, watching as his face turned even redder and his face scrunched up.

    He swifly came from behind the table and came and squatted in front of me, his knee's cracking.
    "Tell me what the code is?" he said calmly, trying to reason with me.
    "Why?"I ask back, once again. This time he lets his rage out and swings his hand up in the air and comes down on my left cheek.

    My head snaps to the right and I let it hang there for a second while I compose my mask, hidding the angry.
    Finally I turn back to him, my eyes blank, my face free, and my mouth set in a strict grimace.

    He raises his hand again, but before he could repeat his actions. Two tall men, both in black suits and sunglasses walk in. One with black hair and the other with brown.

    "Mr. Utah, were going to have to ask you to step away from the girl, and we'll excort you out of here" the one with black hair said. I look at Mr. Utah, who had now turned even redder. He glanced at me then at the gentleman and quietly collected his suitcase and a couple of papers and walked quickly out the door.

    The man gave me a small tilt of their head, looking at me from the corner of their eyes. I stare straight ahead, not letting their glances affect me. Luckly they turn on their heels and leave.

    Once I hear the metal door shut, I allow myself to take a sigh, but I don't let relief settle in my face. I keep my face stern and locked. My eyes wonder around the room, every once in a while, but the room has only white walls. Even my outfit they gave me is white.

    They were trying to isolate me, trying to make me seem alone and make me go crazy, but this isn't the first time I've been isolated. The last time was worst, the scars of the memories still stay in my head. I barely sleep, sometimes the memories come back.

    Closing my eyes, I lay my head back and stay there. Listening to any sound or movement indicting their watching me, but I don't hear none.

    But I know they are, because I'm their one shot to unlocking the secrets no one has ever told before.
     
  2. Bump! this is great
     
  3. Please update then is excellent
     
  4. Great start. Bump!
     
  5. 
     
  6. I love it. I love you.
     
  7. Great start! Remember to proof read  other than that, it's wonderful.
     
  8. Falcon Kick! *falcon kicks lunar* Her story is perfect. Just like it's writer 
     
  9.  -flies to another dimension- it is. I'm sorry, I didn't mean to say its not great. It's just the spelling kinda gets to me 
     
  10. *falcon pinches air so hard it defies the laws of physics, punches uner back into this diminsion and into next tuesday*
     
  11. *punches* *luner*
     
  12. Percyous, say sorry 
     
  13. Sorry . Happy princess?
     
  14. I didn't have to wait long before a tall women, with soft grey eyes, and a happy smile walked in. She was wearing a burgundy suit with sliver bottoms. Her smile was friendly and welcoming as if she worked at the daycare.

    When I'm done looking her over she walks over to me and sits down in front of me.
    "Hello darling, I'm Rosemary" She says, holding her hand out.
    I stare at her, I knew what type she was. The type who seemed nice and friendly, who's smile was so bright, it could light the world.

    But on the inside she was twisted, dark, and sickening, and all I had to do was say the right words. So instead of shaking her hand, I applyed my mask. I kept my eyes clear, my mouth set into a strern grimace, and my face free, not given away a single emotion.

    The lady pulled her hand back, already knowing what I was doing.
    "I'm not going to heart you, sweetheart. I'm going to tell you why we need the code" she says calmly. I raise a eyebrow in response.

    "If we get those codes and unlock the secrets, just think of the things we can do! We could save lives!" She says, motioning with her hands. I keep my face blank, not even raising my eyebrow's anymore.

    When she doesn't see a change, she quickly continues.
    "We could cure diseases, we could make kids smarter, we could become the Most Developed Country in the World!" She says, making a circle with her arms and smiling brightly at me.

    Knowing this was my chance to expose her real colors, I spoke.
    "I would never, ever dream of giving codes to people like you and the government. Look where people like you have gotten American now! You give a America a cure for diseases, more are going to come! You make learning easier, more kids are going to become stupid, because your giving them the easy option! And more developed! Is that all you care about! I will never. give. you. Or anyone else these codes" I say, keeping my voice calm, but deadly.

    For a second she just stands there, her smile slowly dropping, but instead of coming back, she narrows her eyes, clenches her teeth, and squats down. She swung her hand in the air, and I prepared myself for another slap.

    What I didn't expect was a fist connecting with the left side of my face. I fell to the side, my nose already bleeding, but before I can get up, she grabs a fistful of my hair and yank my head to its in front of her.

    "You listen here little girl, no body's going to stop me from getting these damn codes!" She yells at me, then she lets go of my hair and stands up. I put my hand to my nose, feeling the blood, quickly I cup my hand over it.
    I look and see she's on the phone, I frown, we can't have phones in here.

    "Hey Rogar, were ready, blow it up" She says, then she turns to me.
    "Ever been kidnapped before?" She asks, smiling darkly. My eyes widened and she pulls out a needle with clear stuff in it. My body reacts and I jump up and take off running to the door, I bang on it, willing it to open.

    The lady smiles at me and walks over, I coward under her, praying the door opened. She crouched down beside me and held up the needle, and just as she did, the door opened. I was just about to get up, when I felt a jab in my arm.

    My vison blurred and my body slowed down, till finally I couldn't move. The last thing I remember is several people running and screaming.

    Then finally I blacked out
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    Sorry If spelling mistakes, I have to go to school and I wanted to update
     
  15. Rosmary.... Sounds familiar....... I'LL KILL HER!!!!
     
  16. It's soooooooo good! BUMPPP!
     
  17. BUMP!!!


    Tht ***** :evil:


    I'm with you Percy imma kill her!!!!!


    Update soon