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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -KittyInBunnyland-, Aug 28, 2012.

  1. Just Another Summer

    I was skating down the streets of San Antonio, Texas in some avenue that made me feel the excitement; it was six thirty in the evening and wasn't dark, yet. The summer breeze was refreshing, and that night, the most amazing yet horrifying thing happened.

    I fell in love with a complete stranger.

    As I cruised on my Element skateboard, a guy in tight black jeans and a black Bullet For My Valentine shirt sat on the sidewalk alone and depressed. I stopped just a few feet away from him and got lost in a trance. He had a piercing on his lower right lip, his hair jet black with a side fringe to his left. He didn't notice me until my board suddenly dropped from my slender arms.

    He looked at me intensely with his sad but beautiful light blue eyes. It was enthralling. I got lost in my thoughts and then his thin lips formed a smirk. I snapped out of it and blushed like crazy. My heart was beating rapidly.

    I dropped my skateboard and a loud impact hit the ground, I place my right foot on the front and paddled with my left, it was damn right embarrassing.

    My silky smooth black hair flowed with the wind as my grey scarf choked me lightly on my neck. I was riding too fast, so I stopped in a heartbeat. I looked around me, the trees were rustling with the wind, and I felt the creeps. I was lost... and I wasn't even from Texas. I just came to visit my aunt and then there I wasㅡ lost.

    I sat down the sidewalk and buried my head under my arms. I kept cussing at myself when suddenly a husky sweet voice ringed in my ears, "Hey."

    I looked up and saw the gorgeous guy from earlier. His nose was perfect, but there was a slight slant and I guessed right there that he must've been into a fight.

    I stammered with a low voice, "He-hey..."

    He sat beside me and laughed a melodic laugh, "You're not from here, are you?"

    I looked at him as I covered my mouth with my scarf, my head moved left to right, "No..."

    He smiled at me with those sorrowful eyes. I wanted to ask what happened... but he's a stranger for Hades' sake!

    He stood up and grabbed my hand. He would take me home, he said. And I just followed him out of my lost of direction. I apologised to him a lot of times as we walked with my skateboard under his arm.

    I stayed behind him. Even from behind, he still looked gorgeous. I admired my view for the rest of that time. I love him, I know I do. I really really do.

    He stopped suddenly and turned to me, "Will I see you tomorrow?"

    My chinky light brown eyes widened in shock and excitement. My heart was jumping up and down. I wanted to scream so badly. "Su-sure..." I said.

    He chuckled, gave my skateboard back to me and said goodbye. And the next thing I knew, I was in front of my aunt's home. How did he know I lived here? I felt uneasy but the fact that he asked if I could see him the next day was beyond amazing.

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    The next day was magical. It was like we knew each other for so long. I didn't feel like he was a stranger at all. He was perfectly imperfect. If this was a fairytale, he'd be my prince.

    Days passed, every moment I spent with him. My aunt didn't really care what I did. All she had to do was to look after me over the summer.

    What if summer will be over? The question that bugged me completely and started our first little fight.

    "Blake..." I said as my head on his lap. We were picnicking on the beach and it wasn't that crowded. My voice was shaking in fear.

    "Yeah, Eli?" He said.

    "What will happen after summer's over?" A tear suddenly dropped. It was already two months since we've known each other. And I loved him completely... Right away.

    His eyes widened in shock, fear, pain and sadness. He looked straight to the sea and he didn't look at me for a long time.

    "Answer me." I begged.

    He let me go and headed off the the sea. I stared at him as he walked away from me. Tears started to well up.

    I ran to him and hugged him from behind, "Blake!" I said.

    "Let me go..." his voice was rough and it tortured me.

    "No," I sighed. "what's wrong?"

    "You're leaving, aren't you?" He screamed as he jerked away from me.

    I fell down the white sand as I cried my heart out. It was painful in a way that I could just die at that moment. "I- I don't want to leave."

    "It's better if we're gonna call this quits." Tears started to stream down his face.

    I stared at his eyes, it brimmed in anger. "It's over...?" I said unbelievably.

    He nodded as he wiped his tear away.

    "No... No! You can't do this to me. Blake... I love you." I finally said it. The three words that meant so much.

    He stared at me and turned his back on me. He went back to the spot we sat on and grabbed his phone and left.

    He left me. LEFT ME.

    Just as I thought he'd left me, I heard someone scream, "Eli! I LOVE YOU! FOREVER!"

    I stood up as fast as I could and ran to look for him. And there he was near his car, holding something that I've been longing for.

    "I told you I'd do it." He said as he sobbed.

    It was a mixtape... A special mixtape made by him. My one and only love.

    He handed it to me and I thanked him. We stared into each other's eyes and shared our first kiss. The kiss that still lingered on my lips. The kiss that I will never forget.

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    Summer was over in just a blink of an eye. Before my departure to Los Angeles, we fought countless times. But my love for him didn't lessen one bit. But instead, every single moment we were together, I would grow much more in love with him.

    I texted him two words that made me hurt the entire time. Goodbye Blake.

    It was only five hours from then and I would board. I just thought of him that time. Hoping he'd come to the airport and bid me the proper goodbye.

    And he did. He really did. Only thirty minutes left and I would board the plane.

    "Eli..." He said as he looked into my eyes.

    "Blake, I'm sorry." I said.

    "Don't be. Let's still keep in touch, okay? I love you, Eli."

    "I love you..." I said as we kissed the last time. It was short, sweet and passionate.

    "See you soon." He said.

    "Goodbye, Blake. I love you..." I whispered to myself and waved to him. I got on the tube to the plane and walked in tears. Pain... It never leaves me.

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    Three months have passed. The first two months were still great but he suddenly lost his communication with me. He never replied to all my e-mails, texts and calls. It was curiosity that killed me.

    Until one day as I was checking my social networking site, I had the urge to check his name... since we weren't friends.

    Blake Mercer

    I typed in.

    His profile picture was the one I took of him in his home. When his sister had a birthday party. I laughed and relived the moments. As I was about to click ADD FRIEND.

    Something caught my attention...

    IN A RELATIONSHIP WITH VICTORIA CAMPBELL

    I laughed at myself and convinced myself it wasn't real. I checked his photos since it wasn't private.

    I clicked the album, LOVE OF MY LIFE <3. And there I broke my own heart. It was my choice to fall in love with a professional jerk. It was my choice to look for him on that social networking site. It was my choice to look in further.

    His face and her face, kissing pictures, hugging pictures, holding hands pictures, and what broke me the most was him giving her piggyback ride.

    That's what he always did to me... everytime.

    Tears streamed down my face uncontrollably. I shut my laptop close and buried myself under my comforter and my pillow.

    Just a simple message of breaking up would be alright... He doesn't have to make me see for myself... He's such a jerk.

    And there I knew...

    NOT ALL SUMMER LOVE LAST. NOTHING EVER LASTS. FAIRYTALES DOESN'T EXIST. HAPPY ENDINGS AREN'T REAL.
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    Just felt like writing a short story. ._. Letting my emotions flow...

    Hi there. 
    Bye. 
     
  2. D: Awwww!
    That made me cry.. :'(
    >.< Very lovely story though...
     
  3.  Yeah... Summer was such a bitch to me.

    Yes this is non-fiction </3
     
  4. Awww. .-. Sowwy Eli
    We You, and good story.
     
  5. AwwwI literally started crying
     
  6.  Hahaha. 'Tis fine, I guess...
     
  7. Don't worry, Eli. Us, PIMD people, got your back .
     
  8. Thanks Danzo. 
     
  9. Are you Going to write more? It's REAAAAALLY good!!! I mean, I'm sorry that happened to you, it's awful! But the story is really good! Okay this doesn't make any sense at all. Okay I meant, like it's sad that happened to you, but when you write it, it's interesting and a great story!! Please update!
     
  10. I loved it!!!!!
     
  11. I'm sorry to disappoint you, but sadly, no.  There's nothing else to say since he's a bastard. I'm over it already, I don't want to talk to him anymore.