Blow me (One last Kiss) (One-shot)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *AngelSweets (01), Sep 1, 2012.

  1. I sit on my bed, twitching slightly, biting my nails every once in a while. Finally I run my hand through my hair, sighing.

    "Guess he's not calling" I mutter darkly. Getting up, I go to my dresser and look in the mirror. I had black hair that ran to my shoulders, soft brown eyes with sliver flecks.

    I knew that my looks were the only reason he liked me. I ruffle up my hair a little, and grin. Then my grin drops as I remember why I don't wear my hair crazy and fun.

    Because my boyfriend, I think. I start pulling my hair into a ponytail and I start applying makeup. I hated it, but my boyfriend likes it.

    I starts looking for the right blush, when my phone rings. I quickly drop the blush in my hands and rush over to my phone, tripping trying to get over there.

    I laugh at myself and get up and jump onto my bed, and pick my phone up.

    "Hello" I say, still laughing.

    "Sliver? Why are you laughing?" He asks, annoyed already. I quickly stop laughing and put my head down.

    "Well...I-i was just checking out Katie's skinny jeans, they kind of make her look fat...David" I say, closing my eyes, I hated gossiping and talking about people.

    "Oh, well thats good, I though for a second you were laughing about something stupid" He says laughing.

    I grimace but keep my voice even.
    "Yea, haha, so what you calling for sweetheart?" I ask, happy suddenly. Then I realize my mistake, but before I could say anything he speaks.

    "Really Sliver! I keep telling you to stop with the freaking names! God, how many times do I have to mention this! Are you that dumb?!" He yells at me.

    Tears fill my eyes, but I close them off and take several deep breaths.
    "I-i sorr"
    "Whatever, I was calling cause I finally found a dress for you" He says bluntly. I frown and take a big gulp.
    "I-i already have a dress, remember?"

    I say laughing nervously.
    "That one sucks, I told you I want something to throw at everyone, and I don't like when you cover up your body, its doesn't look good, oh also don't forget to wear make-up."He says, acting as if he wasn't offending me.

    I sit there for a moment, letting his words sink in, before I finally get it. He only wants me for my looks, my face, my body, he never like me.

    Keeping myself calm, even though I could feel my blood boil.
    "You know what David, I think you should blow me one last kiss" I say.

    "Really Sliver, enough with the stupid sayings, I told you saying that stuff, isn't going to get you anywhere."He says, annoyed again.

    "Well in this case it means that were over" I say and I hang up. As soon as I do, I feel free, like the whole world just lifted off my shoulders. So I smiled, and this time, it felt real.

    Turning my phone on silence, I go to the back of my closet and pull out all the things David told me not to wear.

    Pulling on a KISS t-shirt, black skinny jeans, and white converse. I ruffle up my hear and laugh, then I walk downstairs. Ignoring my parents who were now yelling at me, I walk out the door.

    Because tonight was the night, I was finally free.
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    Yea, I know it sucks, but its just a little something to let everybody know, never let some1 control who you are, be who you want to be 
    Princess
     
  2. Nice job!! Remember to put a ton of detail in, if you make another story. Awesome!
     
  3. Yay well done Silver!!! Lol
     
  4.  This story has been featured in Fan Fiction News! Congrats! 
     
  5. Isn't the title the name of a song?
     
  6. Yes , and it was featured in FFN, YAYY! I didnt think I'd ever get in there 
     
  7. That was an awesome story!