Hey guys this is a little something that just popped into my head. Hope you like it! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "Ugh....where the hell am I? I feel like I've been hit by a freakin truck....." I go to rub my head, but I can't move my arms. "What the hell?" I'm tied to a chair in a basement. I try and remember what happened, but the only thing I remember is being hit with a hard object and being knocked unconscious. I never saw who did it, and I have no idea where I am. The only thing I know is I'm in a basement tied to a chair. The basement door opens and I start to panic. No one knows I'm here, and I have no clue where I am. 'I don't want to die! I never got to say goodbye to my family!' I thought sadly. Footsteps on the stairs snap me out of my thoughts. I glance at the stairs to get a good look at my abductor. If by any chance I escaped, I wanted to be able to describe him to the police. He steps into the light and I gasp. "No! Not you! Why?! Why'd you do this?!" I cried. He lets out a laugh. It sounded so evil....so psychotic. This wasn't the same person I knew. This was someone else....a complete and total psycho. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ What'd you guys think? Please leave comments and tips! Also criticism is excepted! Love you guys!
This is awesome! I wanna find out more! GO GO GO! Update~ I'm a person who likes psychotic things.
Guys I'm sorry I haven't updated any of my stories, I just had some family visiting me and I've been super busy. They leave tomorrow so I promise I will give you guys a HUGE update. Love you guys
KiKi! I didn't know you wrote! Why did you never tell me?! Well I'm gonna tell Nad so we can be your biggest supporters Its brill girl, keep it coming!
I have different ideas for this story, I'm trying to figure one out, that's why I haven't updated yet srry guys
Should I continue with this story? It doesn't seem like anyone is interested in it....I'm sort of losing my will to write this....
Sorry I haven't updated, I've just been trying to figure this story out. I had so many ideas for it, but I finally decided. This update will be short but the next one will be longer. Enjoy! ******************************************** He slowly stepped towards me. My heart beat faster, the closer he got. 'What is he gonna do to me?' I thought, scared. He finally reached me. "Oh Katie, Katie, Katie" he said, stroking my cheek. "Why did you have to go and do this to me?" I turned away from his hand. I didn't know him anymore, this was a total creep. "Look at me when I'm talking to you!" He yelled and lifted my face up to stare into his eyes, his evil looking eyes. All of the normal warmth and kindness in his eyes were replaced with hatred and pure evil. I thought I saw a little but hurt and pain in his eyes too, but I was too scared to pay attention. "I asked you a question." He said angrily. I didn't know how to answer. "W-What do you mean? I never did anything to you." I replied, scared. He looked angry. He raised his hand and slapped me across my face, the red outline of his hand appearing on my face instantly. The slap echoed through the basement. My cheek was burning and my eyes stung with tears. "What do I mean?! I mean how you broke my heart into a million pieces!! You chose my stupid little brother instead of me!" He shouted. Ho looked at me and saw the tears streaming down my cheeks. His demeanor changed instantly "Oh Katie I'm so sorry! Will you forgive me? I didn't mean to hit you, you just made me so angry!" He said sadly, pushing the hair away from my face. "Don't touch me!" I yelled. "Get away from me! I don't want you near me you jerk!" He pulled his hand away, as if he had just been shocked. He stood up and laughed. "My, my, aren't we feisty?" He said with a smirk. "Why am I here?! What are you going to do to me?!" I asked angrily. He laughed again. "Well isn't it obvious? I'm going to kill you." ******************************************** What did you guys think? Feedback please! Criticism is also accepted!