One word, Hilarious. Not the way the plot takes place, but the choices she used. Seriously? 50 Shades of Grey? Erotic Novel? You could've named it something better. I didn't quite enjoy the book. Hell, I can't lie, I didn't bother read the trilogy! Your sex scenes, Is that even called sex? Oh what am I supposed to know, I'm just some girl who still has virginity~..NO. I've read way better sex scenes than you ever made, James.
I dont mean to sound disrespectful here as I love Chloe but a 12 year old doesn't have an adult's view point on sex related matters and so can't really appreciate a lot of it. She's right that the book is bloody awfully written but there's a lot that someone of that age wouldn't understand in terms of the feelings it attempting to generate. I felt it fails in that too. Wasn't erotic, wasn't kinky. Bared to you was better.
Hey, it was on the children's section on the shelf. Who knew it was a pitiful attempt at writing an erotic novel? :|
Gf's into it. Wanted me to read it. I'm not into the whole Erotic Novel kinda stuff, at least not reading it (I'm all action ) so I immediately turned it down when I went online to know more about it. I thought it was just a regular book. Dont think I'll ever read it.
I puked at the first sentence I read out of the book. My imagination will never be innocent again.