NEED OPINIONS

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by *Neonn462 (01), Aug 23, 2012.

  1. So I was thinking about writing this book where it's like all industry with all kinds of infrastructure and machines and stuff. And like this person(s) take advantage of it somehow to become super powerfull/rich. But then the guy turns corrupt and tries to -no surprise here- conquer the world.So the main person(s) have to fix it. I know that there's a lot of holes and stuff but I think the idea of a huge, industrial world is really cool.

    P.S theres this game on the app store a lot like this but I actually got the idea from studying the industrial revolution in school. So no I'm not copying anything.


     TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK!!!!
     
  2. I find that to be quite clichéd. If you put more twists into it and make it more original, I would be interested in reading it.
     
  3. This should go in Fan Fiction.
     
  4. Sounds like Theodore Roosevelt vs. Monopolies. Just a hunch.
     
  5. Go to Fan Fiction please. And I'm with Goldialocks on the idea....
     
  6. How do go to fan fiction? and I will make it more unique soon but the Idea came to me this morning do give me some time.
     
  7. THREAD CLOSED!!!!!!! Please go to fan fiction for this because thats where I moved it.
     
  8. I would fix your grammar before you start writing a story/book.