Poetry by aiyana

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by *aiyana_parrish (01), Aug 22, 2012.

  1. Name:Desire
    What is it that I really desire is it the touch of your fingers the lingering kiss you leave upon my lips or is it your heart something so pure something so sinisterly great that if any one tried to touch it there whole life would change like mine did is it the way you love me I don't know what you do but my desire is YOU!!!!!!! Thank you for reading more to come
     
    #1 *aiyana_parrish (01), Aug 22, 2012
  2. its acutely pretty good:)
     
    #2 -BR-Baby_Raven_Wolf, Aug 22, 2012
  3. Thank you that means a lot
     
    #3 *aiyana_parrish (01), Aug 22, 2012
  4. Good I guess
     
    #4 SweetCandyFloss, Aug 22, 2012
  5. Thanks I guess
     
    #5 *aiyana_parrish (01), Aug 22, 2012
  6. I like it, its really good and it comes from the heart, always write from there, and all writing you make will be beautiful.
     
    #6 Ledger, Aug 22, 2012
  7. Thanks love that means a lot coming from you
     
    #7 *aiyana_parrish (01), Aug 22, 2012
  8. This is a very nice poem and to think you didn't write it on paper
     
    #8 *legolasbaggins (01), Aug 22, 2012
  9. It's nice and sweet
     
    #9 *legolasbaggins (01), Aug 22, 2012
  10. It's perfect... So powerful.. I love it. Great job sis
     
    #10 *-C_C-Luna_Lovie (01), Aug 22, 2012
  11. Thank you guys
     
    #11 *aiyana_parrish (01), Aug 22, 2012
  12.  I FLAPING LOVE U EVEN MORE NOW
     
    #12 *ChaozShadow66 (01), Aug 22, 2012
  13. Haha thank you alice
     
    #13 *aiyana_parrish (01), Aug 22, 2012
  14. cool sis 
     
    #14 xx_Jmac_xx, Aug 22, 2012
  15. Fantastico!
     
    #15 *X_SexyEllie_X (01), Aug 22, 2012
  16. That's very inspiring. 
     
    #16 Game0ver, Aug 22, 2012
  17. Thanks guys really means a lot
     
    #17 *aiyana_parrish (01), Aug 22, 2012
  18. This poem is a joke like my life I dnt even knw y I write this was stupid
     
    #18 *aiyana_parrish (01), Aug 23, 2012
  19. Whoa what's up with the sudden change? First you're saying thanks and then you're saying it's stupid? It's really good and it's not stupid, when it comes from your heart, it's never stupid. It's a very beautiful poem but don't say it's stupid if you don't like it. All you have to do is move on to another poem, if you say it's stupid then you're lowering your self-esteem. Be confident.
     
    #19 -DDD_AccidentallyMe-, Aug 23, 2012
  20. I was high and upset sorry
     
    #20 *aiyana_parrish (01), Aug 23, 2012
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