~Alex~ -As I walk down the halls I feel every one watching me. I hate being the new kid in school.My parents make us move every time "THAT" happens .Well it's not my foult it's in my jeans I was born this way. I never asked to be like this it's not my foult i cant control my self .Pluss im A 15 year old boy what kind of guy wouldnt get these kind of "feelings." -.- I have to try my best to me normal my perents say .How am i suppost to do that? Maybe I like the way i am , i never cared what people tht of me . Why should i now?........ Or tht is what i thought before i met "HER" she changed something inside me . For the better or worce
A space AFTER punctuation. Not a space before AND after or BEFORE. Don't use emoji in your sentences. A few run-on sentences and some spelling errors. Half-decent start. ^.^
Quite a few spelling errors, but overall I quite like it. Try to spell out full words and shorten the sentences so it won't be too difficult to read.
Yeah well I dnt really care about the spelling and stuff cuz its hard typeing on a small screen and have of the page cuts of when I writte it -.-
It's a good start but all I can say is paragraphs and spelling... Ex. Jeans:genes perentsarents... Other than that well done!