Agi's pov : It was snowing. Winter was already here. I breathed in some cold air that came out as a cloud from my mouth later on. I walked around the manson of marias garden. Now laying in a clean viwe of pure white. It feeld peaseful. But something dident feel right. My eyes widen as i feeld cold metal to my neck.
Hikaru's pov : She was nowhere to be found. Both me, yoru and the maid looked everywhere. For two stressing hours we looked. We stoped as Maria returnd. "Agi is gone." Yoru told her. I cud just watch as her peuppils became smaller and her face white. We all ran out, and looked in the garden. I froze... In the snow, it was tracks of blood and Agi's neckles... But she was still missing....
I honestly can say that the fact that someone put homosexuality in a story on PIMD was very surprising. And refreshing, although it did go a bit to far in that one 'scene'. Lol anyways, if English isn't your first language, what is it?
Yoru's pov : I bited my toung. Where cud she be? Again am i at a bar in the town. After we found the tracks, Maria told us to go inside. I, ended up haveing a big fight with Hikaru. Something about me careing more for her then him. Stupid, right?! I love Hikaru, but Agi is my friend. Why.... Why wud he be so ... Envyes of her? I meet hikaru when i studyd art. He was in my class. One day i found one of the teatchers trying to rape him. I gat the dude fierd. Hikaru in returnd began being with me. And soon it became love. I still rememberd how i pushed him on the tabbil to kiss him deeply. That scen was so beauteful.... If only i cud have one scen like that again. I silent my mind... In the cornor of my eye, I saw someone I knew to well. He ran out and I ran after him.
Agi's pov: I cud not see anything. I was bildfoolede. My hands was ties and so was my legs. Where am I...?
(thx ) Yoru's pov : I pressed the man to the wall. "You again?!" i shouted. The blood red haired man i hald was now breathing fast. "Where is she?" I screamed at him. He berly gat breath to anser. "Mary paid me 100.000 $ to kill her. But my brother Dirk has her in our home. We never pland to kill her. She is too... Ouch... Pure.." he gasped. " Get me to her, Jake!!" i orderd. New data: Jake's pov Dirk's pov: (will update more soon)
Dirk's pov : I look at her without saying anything. Her long, dark blue hair that gos over her sholders like silk fabrik, looks beauteful on her almost white skin. She knows im here. She can hear my breath. Slowlly i stand up. She is sceard, that I know. But what can I do? We took the money without doing the job done. If Mary knew we wud have ourself beheaded. Im... *********** jet I dont feel true love... But.... (now, what do you think Dirk is called? Comments plz. )