Author's note: hi this is my first fan fiction on here I hope you guys like it! __________________________ I sigh for the millionth time as I stare out of the car window at the blur of tress and lights as we drive through many different states. We've been driving for 15 hours already. We'd stayed at a hotel last night after driving for 17 hours straight. Man, this was a long drive. I was getting more and more depressed the closer we were to entering the state of Florida. 'why did we have to move? My life was perfectly fine until now' I thought. I sigh again and turn up the volume on my iPod wishing I was just dreaming and when I woke up, I would be back in Massachusetts, in the city that I was so familiar with. I'd lived there my entire life and grown to love it, even though it was a pretty dangerous city to live in. Sure some of the streets were littered with trash, and yes, people were shot and stabbed often, but hey, I'd grown to love that place. That small little city had a way of growing on you. I thought I would live there forever, but I guess I was wrong. The day my parents told me that we were moving was the worst day of my life. They were so excited to be moving to the glorious Sunshine State. Honestly, I didn't see what was so great about it. Alligators and crocodiles everywhere swimming and lurking in places you'd least expect them. I mean, I've even heard stories of them ending up in people's backyards for goodness sake! Who'd want to live there? It's almost always hot year round and it never snows. That sounded like an awful place to me. So yeah like I was saying, I wasn't happy. I'd been upset for a few days just sitting in my room thinking about all the things I would be leaving behind; my best friends, my school that I'd grown to love(even though it was dangerous), all the places that I was so familiar with and used to, and most important of all, my family. The majority of my family lived in Massachusetts. How could we just up and leave them like that? It didn't seem right at all. My heart sank as my mom excitedly pointed out the Welcome To Florida! sign. The rest of my family was excited, but not me, I felt like I was trapped in a never ending nightmare. 'My life sucks. I know I'm gonna hate it here. I miss my friends already' I thought sadly. I quickly wiped the tears out of my eyes before anyone noticed. I hated it when people saw me crying. It made me feel weak and pathetic. I closed my eyes and turned up my music even more, drowning out everything. 'As soon as I can, I'm moving back. I'm not gonna stay in Florida. I know I'm gonna hate it. I can't believe my parents would ruin my life like this' Little did I know, something unexpected would happen that would make my life in Florida little more tolerable.
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It's really good just add more detail about ur surrounds so the reader can visualize what's happening around her other than that great story I love the way u detailed it and we can feel how she's feelingBump