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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by FallenAngel12321, Aug 9, 2012.

  1. Shaddup and stop spamming our thread
     
  2. Oh thank you 
     
  3. (oh sorry I was a little pre-occupied for the past little while I'll get right to work on my update sorry for the inconvenience)
     
  4. Just hurry up!
     
  5. Yea what he said!!
     
  6. Yesh
     
  7. (here it is)
    Meanwhile at Emile's hideout

    "Son of a!" cried the man as Emile injected him with poison.

    "Die you murderer!" Emile thought because being a scorpion he couldn't talk.

    The man stood for awhile then began to fall because the poison was taking effect.

    "Oh no I'm going to be crushed." Emile thought to himself.

    As the man fell the glow came again and when it was gone Emile was himself again and the mans body lay on the ground. Emile got up walked over and kicked the body.

    "Serves you right!" he snorted as he started to turn but then saw the mans wallet.

    "Well your not going to be needing this anymore." Emile smiled as he took the mans wallet and took all the money out of it. Emile got up and left to buy some food and pay for the apple he had stolen because he knew it was the right thing to do.
     
  8. Yes! MY TURN
     
  9. Alright I have to read this from the beginning but I'll be back later hhehe
     
  10. Still running, max was avoiding large shiny stalagmites, with the feeling that he was flying just how he liked it. As soon as he ran around a corner he spotted a crater the size of two elephants; It looked liked it never ended but it was just the right size too stop the boulder.

    A challenge!" he thought "Better make this jump count"

    When the time came too jumped he slipped on a crumbling rock and he fell too his doom not knowing when he would ever land

    But then a bright glow came

    When the glowing stopped he was somehow being carried upward, no not carried flying! Max looked to his side to see 8 feet wings sticking right next to him! He soared upward with the wind in his hair, no not hair feathers, yea feathers that sounded more right to him. As he looked up he heard the boulder rolling to the large hole.

    "Oh no," he said in his mind " If I don't
    hurry up I'll be trapped!"

    Max flapped his wings hard aiming himself to the edge of the hole, it was like slowing time as he was reaching the edge a circle like shadow creeping up on him slowly.

    A sharp pain reached his tail as he flew out of the hole, Max crashed to the ground, blacking out an laying still.

    A few minutes later he woke up "Mom I got a ouchie" he said softly.

    Quickly he sat up observing his surroundings realizing he wasn't at home. A gloomy puddle of water laid next to him looking over he saw his reflection as a

    Eagle
     
  11. Thats the longest I've ever wrote
     
  12. Fallens it's your turn
     
  13. Fallen your up come on