Shadow Stormer

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -Knight, Aug 13, 2012.

  1. Intro:

    " Father,Father where are you?" I had say that day running around the woods trying to find him, but to no avail because when I finally found him he was almost dead.

    I walked toward him trying not to cry but the tears just fell down not noticing someone was behind me. " so this is the kid you have been trying to save, your pathetic brother he will died soon when the shadow stormer find him." the man said before walking away.

    " son run before they get here." father said to me. " the Shadow Stormer are…" before he could finish what he was saying someone appear stabbing him in the back,killing him.

    I started to shake in fear as he looked at me. " Nikolai the son of Queen Rita and Brandon the one and last half vampire in the world." he said walking toward me.

    I just looked at him trembling in fear not being able to move when out of nowhere someone grabbed my hand carry me away. " son you really need to be more careful next time " the person said to me

    " M-mommy?" I said as more tears appeared on my face. I cry on her shoulder not being to stop crying.

    " yes son it's me."she said before putting me in the ground. " son run run and keep on running and don't you dare look back." she said to me,which I understood right away that it was a signal saying that she was gonna fight that man until one came back alive. I started to run away unable to look back.
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    I opened my eyes sweating realizing that everything was just a dream. " Love are you okay? " my girlfriend said to me as she came to comfort me.

    I nodded still shaking in fear,that nightmare always haunted me ever since I was 4 years ago since it was the last time I ever saw my mom and dad.

    " don't worry love everything is okay remember I'm here " she hugged me and kissed. I just looked at her and smiled.
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    I know it's short but I will be updating it later today
     

  2. Bonus points if you slip the name Jack in there 
     
  3. Mine are shorter, this looks good
     
  4. Awesome so far
     
  5. Nikolai:

    I got up from bed and started to walk around my room trying to shake the nightmare away.

    " love calm down you know that happened 15 years ago when you were only 4 years old, they won't come after you " Christine said to me.

    I looked at her sad. " I know but I'm afraid that they may come after me and kill you."

    " you know I will never leave your side, after all I'm your fiancée " she smiled at me then got up an left the room.
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    Christine:

    I got out of his room and went to the basement taking out my phone and calling someone.

    " father he is completely under my control, he still doesn't know I'm manipulating so that we can kill him." I said smiling.

    " good keep it up and kill him when the right time comes." the man said to me laughing.

    " yes father, he doesn't expect anything and won't ever expect that I'm a Shadow Stormer also " I said laughing evilly.
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    Jack:

    I hanged up my phone and looked at the watch. " 3 mores hour to go before we finally can kill the last half vampire in the world." I said laughing.

    I went outside my office and went to meet the others. " remember kill everyone who stands in our way and remember to bring my daughter chairing back alive." I told them

    They all nodded and begin to get ready as I watched.
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    Nikolai:

    I couldn't help myself but feel a chill on my spine as if it was telling me that something wrong was gonna happen to me. I went outside and went downstairs when I heard Christine talking to someone.

    " yes father, he doesn't expect anything and won't ever expect that I'm also a Shadow stormer." I just stood there in shock before putting my clothes on quickly and waited for her to come out of the basement. When she finally came, I had my gun pointed at her head.

    " you are coming with me Christine." I said to her pointing at her head still.

    " what's going on love?"she said to me trying to sound scare but I was able to see through he lie.

    " don't act as if you don't know anything bitch." I said to her before knocking her out by hitting her on the neck with my gun. I picked her and tied her up, then threw her inside my car and I droves away. " that's what I get for trusting someone " I said to myself.
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    Another update I will update it later
     
  6. (**** YEA! Jack is a total BA! So he is like head vampire or something? Cause that is incredible)
     
  7. Your the head vampire for the Shadow Stormers 
     
  8. (o people better watch out, because Jack will open up a can of whoop as*
     
  9. Seems like a really good plot starting. Go Alex!! Woo! 
     
  10. Great job! Bump!
     
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    Nikolai POV:

    " I trusted you Christine,we were suppose to get married but like everyone else everyone close to me have to turn against me and try to kill me " I said to her driving.

    Christine looked at me and started to cry" I'm sorry love but my father, he told me he was gonna kill me if I didn't obey his orders "

    " don't try to act innocent when I heard everything you said to him " I yelled at her completely mad.

    She kept on crying until she took me gun and pointed it at me. " give up Niko you know you can't win against me " she said to me.

    I smiled at her then made a U-turn making her drop the gun but I didn't notice the Tree in front, on which I crashed the car on.
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    Angela POV:

    I was walking around when I saw the car crash into the tree. I went to check out if anyone survived and all I could see was that only the guy was breathing while the girl was dead. I took my phone out and called the police. It took them about 10 minutes to get here.

    " move we will take care of this " a policeman said to me as I saw the guy being loaded into the ambulance. I walked toward the police man.

    " may I go with them, I'm his wife." I sad to him lying. I actually didn't know why I felt the urge to be next to the guy.

    " yes Madame you can." the police man said to me as I got on and we rode to the hospital.
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    Trish POV:

    I was at the hospital waiting for the doctor to come out and tell me how my was doing when I saw him. He was being pulled into the emergency room and I just watched. There was something odd about him and I actually didn't know how I knew.

    " excuse me " said a girl sitting next to me. A doctor came toward her and asked her.

    " Madame can you tell me your husband name and how old he is?"

    " his name is Carl Maximus and he is 20 years old." the girl answered.

    " was he drunk when the car crashed and why weren't you with him?"

    " yes most likely and I wasn't with him because I had to go visit my parents."

    " what is your name and how old are you?"

    " my name is Angela Maximus and I'm 21 years old." she answered smiling.

    " we will try our best to see if he will survive so please wait here.

    She nodded and smiled.
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    Angela POV:

    " so many lies I told the doctor." I though to myself and one thing for sure I couldn't stop thinking of the guy.

    I looked around and saw someone staring at me but then she looked away.
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    All I could think off but I will update tomorrow
     
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    Nikolai POV:

    I opened my eyes and saw myself at the hospital. A doctor came toward me. " Carl good to see your alive " he said smiling at me. I just looked at him and saw myself being hungry.

    " please leave me alone " I said growling trying to let my hunger get on my way. He just looked at me and got out of the room. I got up and looked for my clothes but I couldn't find it, until I looked at the closet where my clothes was at but it had blood on it.

    "what happened?" I asked myself as I started to get dizzy. I grabbed the clothes and putted it on, then I opened the window and saw that I was on the eight floor. " dammit " I yelled in frustration as I jumped off the window and landed on top of a car.
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    Angela POV:

    I waited for about 2 hours before the doctor finally came. " Madame it looks like your husband is doing well, he just woke up a few minutes ago." he said to me smiling.

    I sighted in relief when one of the nurses came toward the doctor. " doctor the patient Carl Maximus has disappeared, he isn't on his room." the nurse said panicking.

    " how can this happen, nobody was allow to go see him not even his wife " the doctor said worry. " someone must have gotten inside the hospital and kidnapped him.

    I just looked at them not knowing what to say. " miss Maximus don't worry we will find him " the doctor said to me so I nodded.
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    Trish POV:

    I just watched in shock as I saw called Carl Maximus land on top of my car without getting hurt. I just couldn't believe what I just. " it's impossible no one could have survived a eight floor fall."

    He knocked on my door. " move " he growled at me as I moved aside. " good, I don't have time to be follow by the police so your gonna be coming with me even if you don't like it do you understand?" he looked at me.

    I nodded in fear and just looked at him. " why are you doing this?" I asked him.

    " the less you know the better so don't ask again." he growled at me again. I just looked at him and started to cry scare that he was gonna kill me.
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    Nikolai POV:

    " I don't like this idea either but I don't want people to follow me and try to kill me " I said to her when I saw her cry.

    " but why me?"she asked me still crying.

    " I don't have time to explain " I said to her as I started the car and started to drive. " I'm sorry but when I know we are safe I will let you go." I said calmly to her.

    She nodded as she stopped crying. " I'm Trish and you are?" she said calmly now.

    " I'm Nikolai." I said to her.

    " weird I though your name was Carl Maximus " she said confuse.

    I growled and stopped the car. " who told you that?" I asked her almost mad.

    " I heard this woman named Angela say." she answered.

    " damn." I said driving back to the hospital. " I want you to go get her and bring her back do you understand?" I looked at her menacing.

    She nodded and went inside the hospital.
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    Trish POV:

    I walked inside the hospital looking for Angela when I finally saw her. " excuse me can you come with me?" I asked her. Honestly I didn't know why I was doing what Nikolai was telling to, I just didn't know why.

    Angela just looked at me then nodded. " yes of course but where to?" she asked me.

    " someone in the parking lot wants to see you " I told her as I started to walk away and she follow me.

    After a few minutes of walking we finally arrived to where Nikolai was parked at. " this is her " I pointed at Angela.

    He nodded then said. " get inside now both of you, I have gotten both of you in trouble so now you two are my accomplices." he growled when saying that so I got on the car.
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    Nikolai POV:

    I saw that Angela was just looking at me in confusion. I looked at her in the eyes and said. " get inside please " se nodded and got inside.

    " why are we your accomplices?" Trish asked me.

    " I'm somewhat special and this group of people want to kill me and they know when someone has been around me and just kill them." I explained.
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    short update but I will keep on working on this story
     
  13. Great plot, very interesting, check grammer, and details.
     
  14. awesome