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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by FallenAngel12321, Aug 9, 2012.

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    Back to the forest
    The wind in his hair, dodging obstacles,and not knowing when to stop, is what max loved best. "I can't take this anymore to many voices! It just has to stop!" As he keeps running though the forest he notices a cave that was never there and max slowed down to get a view.

    "This has never been here before I always run this way" Max mumbles
    Entering the cave slowly he notices the vines in the cracks,bones laying on the ground, and it looked like it was ....booby trapped.
     
  2. Good job. Do I update next?
     
  3. BUMP! UPDATE >:3
     
  4. That was the first chance I had to go on… I'll update when I'm back, in about three hours.
     
  5. I know I know, it's terrible. I had, like, no inspiration.

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    Sammi inched along the wall, feeling the cold stone dig into her back. A few yards ahead loomed the massive iron-wrought gate. Guards prowled around it, scanning for intruders. And beyond it was freedom.

    Stardust silently crept alongside Sammi. They reached a small area covered by canvas resting on four metal posts. A mini silver fridge, wooden tables, and cushioned chairs were sitting underneath. It was the guards' rest spot.

    Sammi hurried inside the thankfully vacant shelter. She peered around a table and accidentally knocked a beer to the ground. It rolled on the tile, its contents draining out. "No!" She gasped and looked frantically around. No one had seen her.

    "Hey! Roger!" A skinny brown haired man came marching into view in front of the gate.

    "You're late," his beefy companion grumbled. He towered over the other man. "Don't be late again."

    "Roger, Roger! Look, I have one minute to spare! Go rest now, I'm not late!" His heavy accent was tinted with a hint of worry.

    Sammi grinned. The plan was going perfectly. Once Roger turned around to go back to the villa, the replacing guard would be preoccupied for a moment. Then she could slip out the gate unnoticed.

    "You live this time," Roger muttered darkly. "I'm going to get my beer." Instead of turning, he stomped towards the guardhouse.

    His beer? Sammi remembered the murky brown puddle spreading on the ground and swiftly crawled towards the fridge, cowering behind it. Stardust hid in the shadows under one of the tables. She was all but invisible.

    Roger was coming closer now. As soon as he glanced over to the fridge, Sammi would be caught. What could she do? How could she avoid him?

    She anxiously snatched up the ocelot figurine and clutched it. It started to glow, illuminating Sammi's body. Then she started to glow too. Her eyes turned a blinding white and her vision went blank.

    Sammi could no longer feel her body. She felt like she was slipping out of it, drifting around above her. All that was left of her was her soul, flying up above. Then she came hurtling back to Earth.

    Roger was still coming. Sammi flattened herself against the fridge and cocked her ear, listening for him. Then she glanced down.

    Razor sharp claws protruded from her spotted paw, scratching at the ground. Her sight and hearing had gotten much keener and she was much lower to the ground.

    Sammi hurtled under one of the tables. They were tiny, but she was able to fit easily. Staring in shock at her reflection in the fridge, Sammi instantly realized what had happened.

    She was an ocelot.

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  6. I'll up date tomorrow k
     
  7. (ok I'm going to work on it right after I read fallens right now)
     
  8. At Emile's hideout

    Emile held onto the little golden scorpion figurine flipping it over in his hands. He sat wondering who had lost it and how he could find them to return it to them. He may be a thief when it comes to food but that's different from someone's belongings he thought as he traced the details on it with his fingernail.

    "I wish I was a scorpion because they are so cool and dangerous." Emile said as he put the keychain in his pocket. His hideout was his old house that had been abandoned and left alone. Everyone was scared to go into it because they thought it was haunted by his parents ghosts.

    "Hello Emile." a voice said from behind him. He turned around lightning fast to see the man responsible for his parents death behind him. He clenched his hands into fists and started to get angrier than he had ever been before.

    "I'll kill you!" he screamed as his body was enveloped by a brilliant white light. He felt a sense of weightlessness and then he looked at the man and was shocked the man was suddenly huge. He looked around and realized the man wasn't huge he was tiny he had become a scorpion. He didn't waste any time he immediately crawled over and up the man onto his back and stung him with his tail in a furious rage of hatred.
     
  9. You all are amazing!! Update!!
     
  10. (actually its epics turn)
     
  11. (so its just us three now)
     
  12. (Yep kinda bad but it's fine)
     
  13. You just made me talk in parentheses
     
  14. WOOP go us
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    Back at the cave
    "Booby trapped! How could that be!"
    As he looks around he makes sure not to step on anything old, "Maybe it's not after all." As soon as he said that he stepped on a stone slab that's started falling "What the FU" He starts running to the other side of the cave dodging arrow head coming from the holes on the side, and jumping over somewhat large holes that lead to a dark hole."If I get myself killed I'm going to HE" Before he could finish that sentence a giant boulder started coming to him."This is starting to look like I'm INDIAN JONES all I need is a hat and a whip."Max said running