This bit was meant to go at the end of the last update up I forgot sooo..... Tayne's P.O.V I see jake pushing some girl up against the lockers in the changing room. He is pretty much eating her face. The girl is trying to pull away but he won't let her I got to help her. "Oi jerk! Back away from the girl!" I yell at Jake before I grab he shirt and pull him away from her. I hit him in the face knocking him out cold. Turn back to the girl and can't believe who it is.... Leah's P.O.V I walk towards the lunch room, looking around to see if I can see Tayne anywhere. I walk around the corner and see him talk to some bleach blonde devil. My heart is crushed. I start running. I don't know where to I just go wherever I can. Time has slowed down. I find myself crying in the locker room. I can't understand why I feel this way. I have Jake he's my boy friend and he is the hottest guy in school with his light brown hair that has been bleached on top by the sun. And then his green eyes that make me want to melt. But yet I can't get Tayne out of my head. He wasn't like Jake at all in fact he wasn't like any guy I had ever met. "babe are you in here? Brooke told me she saw you run in here" i hear jakes soft but manly voice ask. I wipe my tears away. " I'm right here jakey" i mumble as I hug him. He kisses my forehead. "what's wrong babe?" " oh just um having a bad day that's all" I reply making something up. " naw Hun come here", he picks me up and holds me close. "hehe jakey put me down" " fine" he gently places me on the ground so I kiss me. His kisses start to get more intense and heated. I feel my self getting pushed back into the lockers and I feel him push against me. I pull back for air and scream, trying to get away. He doesnt stop he keeps kissing me getting more passionate. "Jake stop it!" i scream " I don't want to!" Next thing I no jake is laying knocked out on the floor, Tayne is standing over him and I am crying my eyes out. I run. I just want to get out of there. It's all to much for me I got to get out... Um yeah didn't really know what to write but u guys wanted an update so yeah
-------------------------------------------- Shays POV -------------------------------------------- I walked into the gym looking for Tayne, I knew he would be in there shooting hoops. Just as I walk in, Leah comes running out in shock and barges past me. She came from the locker room. Time to investigate. ------------------------------------------- I walk into the locker room. Before my eyes, Jake is knocked out cold while Tayne bent over him with a grin. Immediately, I ran away to phone the police. ------------------------------------------- Detective Mal Fisher and Special FBI Agent Nadia Atkinson arrive ------------------------------------------- Tayne's POV ------------------------------------------- I knew that Shay had called the police. I saw the detectives strut in. I just ran. I didn't know where, I just ran as the man chased me. Finally, he grabbed me and pushed me against the table. He said his name was Detective Mal. I saw tears fall down my cheeks. "I didn't mean to..." I heard myself say as he pushed me into a shack. He questioned me. I didn't know what to say. So I asked if jake was alright. ------------------------------------------ Jake's POV ------------------------------------------ I woke up with Leah and Shay bent over me. I was in hospital. I had bandages and tubes all over me. "The doctor says you have 3weeks in here then you can come out." muttered Leah as she wiped a tear. The doctor took her outside and talked to her. She was crying like never before... -------------------------------------------- That was the update I know it's rubbish as im a rubbish writer. Ive collaborated with sexxypants .
I like the story and Other than Tayne falling its fine that part was funny but was more awesome was the part with Jake and Leah