When You Wake (Service)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by DoneDeleted, Aug 13, 2012.

  1. ,_, I seem to have stumbled again writing. I have been pretty down lately, I was tired of everything.

    This is a One~Shot, not a huge book to comment everything.

    I'd love some criticism, if you would.
    I have afraid been losing my touch.

    And I thought for fun, just to get everyone excited, maybe you could create a character to be added in the story? I think it gives a new look.

    Plus, when I make characters, they eventually turn out the same, or they fart constantly ,_, that means I screw it up.

    So, if you would love to post your character in, I'd appreciate it.

    So, the rules: >:3
    1. Follow the instructions, please.
    2. Picture is required.
    3. You can submit up to 2 characters for your own, but for my sake. one.
    4. Be creative, I love new things.
    5. Don't fight with anyone being similar, but I'd they are exactly the same, well poo, I might not pick any.
    6. Put some background.
    7. Not too inappropriate.
    8. Have fun, I don't want this to be a fight, just a fun thing. Agreed?

    Layout-
    Name-
    Age-
    Personality-
    Weapon(optional)
    Type(anything, human, angel, etc, but I prefer less of monsters ,_,
    Genre- (What type are you more comfortable with, then that might be by my choosing)
    Background-(I'd love a long one)
    Extras-
    Common- (Anything to do with you?)
    Picture-

    I don't know what the genre is, but I will base it out, it shall be interesting.

    Have a blast!
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  2. Can I ask what you mean by Common?
     
  3. If this has anything to do with you, as I mean, does this person reflect something in your life.

    Example-
    1.I think that when I was 12, my personality was like that.
    2. My friend is exactly like that.
    3. I would have turned out like that if I had fangs.
     
  4. Or it could be in a book, or a story you made, anything, just something that connects to it.
     
  5. Oh. Thanks. ^•^
     
  6. No problem, I shall do one as well for the fun of it 
     
  7. I wanna do one!!!! Brb!
     
  8. I'll do one maybe
     
  9. Sammi
    17
    Mean, doesn't like people, kinda violent
    The sword in the pic is her weapon
    Angel
    Any genre. This would probably be fantasy…
    She hates being an angel, and wants to be a normal person. That's why she's so bitter and distant. Her parents were in an evil angel gang(yes, there's one of those) and the good angels destroyed their gang. They sent Sammi to Earth because she hates the other angels and would always attack them. She wants to be a normal person because both of parents used to be one, but they turned into an angel.
    Her hobby is running. She likes to run… and fight
    Nothing in common
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  10. I almost wanna put Guy in here 
     
  11. Name: Katharine Maria Pryde (Kat, Mari, Kitty, Kath)
    Age: 15 yrs. old
    Personality: modest, kind, honest, Cute, smart, sweet, shy but If you get on her bad side she will fight you if she must.
    Type: human
    Genre: unknown
    Extras:
    Sister (older): Solin - dead
    Sister (younger): Primrose
    Mother: Unknown (dead)
    Father: Unknown (dead)
    Background: Her parents and older sibling died in a fire which she remembers but wishes not to but has to remember for reasons that we will never know. To this day Kitty and her sister take care of each other even if it means death for one of them.
    Common: We are both shy and Both human and both girls
    Picture- [​IMG]
     
  12. (Any genre for me is fine that's why I wrote unknown because I don't know which one would be best )
     
  13. Audrey Linner
    Age- 17
    Personality- Quiet, sees the world differently, doesn't care much for anything.
    Genre- Mystery, but any.
    Common- Have a friend who looks like her, and acts like her, even though of she's on the nut side, and a midget.
    Weapon- None.
    Bio- Born in Germany and stayed there until she 12, then moved to London. She is currently working in a circus for creative gyms driv
     
  14. Gymnastics, but always wanted to believe her beliefs, always wanted to be in the art of the gypsy since her great great grandmother was one.
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  15. Oh and also for extras for my character:
    Kitty believes in Wicca and will do anything to join up with any of the celebrations and practices. But Katharine fears that people will hate her because of this belief.
     
  16. Sammi is a loner. No one likes her.
     
  17. >.< I hope more shall participate.
     
  18. Yeah I wanna have guy in here :3 although I'm not too sure how to describe him... Or get a picture of him...
     
  19. Is this kinda like Guy?
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