『Second Chance』

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by wowlery, Aug 12, 2012.

  1. Here goes nothing....
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    『Second Chance』

    I lay on the cold concrete, fading away. The deep wound in my stomach bleeding profusely as I look over at you. Your face is a pale white, framed with your curly pale brown hair. Your deep blue-green eyes hidden behind your closed eyelids. Blood flowing from your chest, your breathing slow and ragged.

    I slowly reach over and gently place my hand on your cold cheek, a final smile twisting it's way onto my face. My breathing slows, and my heart beats one last time. The world fades to darkness.
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    It's short. I know. ,_, And it's crappy. So yeah....
     
  2. I told you I'd be first!
    It's soo good Twin! (or triplet lawlz)
    BUMP!
     
  3. Thanks Twin.(Shh!)

    >.< I am scared.
     
  4. Don't be. :3 It's really good. :>
     
  5. >:3 Its awesome!
    BUMP!
     
  6. I LOVE THIS
     
  7. :> I'm curious.
    Epic, lassie.
     
  8. Very mysterious, I dont
    Ike it, I love it. 
     
  9. Thanks guys.  I'm still surprised you like this though. 
     
  10. AHEM. SO! I had the next update for this all ready and everything, but then, because I'm a goddamn idiot, I accidently replaced half of my update with a p, then I deleted the other half. Luckily I had the first half in a chat with my friend, but the other half I have to write all over again. >.>
     
  11. Omg I hate when that happens!!
     
  12. Nice story keep it up
     
  13. P for percyous was here  *epic troll face*