Just be careful what you post because it can be interpreted in different ways by different people. Again I say slow down, Try and put yourself in the moment. Also remember to proof read
I feel like I have a couple more to do and this story shall be completed and if anyone mistook Troy saying "gross bisexual" sorry, he meant that Dylan is gross for hitting on him while he's dating Tori. Chapter 5 Seriously? Was I just hit on by a guy? Not just any guy, my best friend's boyfriend. If he's hitting on me then he might be hitting on other people. What if he's a cheater and has another boyfriend or girlfriend. He's sleazy, more of a reason why Tori shouldn't date him. I don't know if I should tell Tori about this, she might think I'm lying or an idiot, or ruining our friendship. Even if we're just friends I wouldn't risk anything to end our friendship. I don't know many people who can be so smart, play video games, and watch south park and still smell nice. Her scent is this candy smell that is intoxicating and will make you just melt on the inside. After school Tori and I met up at "Sal's Burgers" a local burger joint that has the best burgers around. "Tori, I-I got to tell you something." I told her. "What is it Troy?" she asked. I really have to tell her this, I wouldn't feel right not telling her, but I can't mention the whole thing, like the flirting he was doing. "I don't think Dylan is the right guy for you." I spoke with courage. Her ocean colored eyes looked up at me with her serious face. "Why do you say that?" "You know I like him." "I can't believe you Troy, you're my best friend you're suppose to support me." She said. "Yeah I'm your best friend, I'm suppose to support you and look out for you. I think he'll just going to break your heart." I explained. She made an aggrovated "AH!" sound. "Is this about me drunk texting you?" Tori asked. "How did you get drunk Tori, please tell me?" I asked. "I promised not to do it again, it was Dylan, we were partying with his friends when they thought of an idea to play a game that involved drinking everytime you answered a question wrong.... Just my luck it wasn't school educational questions. It was pop culture trivia. So after answering 30 question I got 25 wrong." she confessed. "If your playing drinking games, imagine what else you'll do with Dylan if you stay with him." I said. I don't know what she thought in her mind, but in mine I saw bad things. I could see them being arrested for illegal activities or worst her being pregnant and him ditching her. "Fine, I'll probably break up with him Troy." she said. After that conversation we had delicious burgers and I went home happy. I went on netflix to watch South Park. I went in the shower making dubstep noises because I love dubstep, I enjoy how unique it is and the bass drops and how my parents are like "What the heck is this crap?". After getting out of the shower I knew my curly locks would return to me. As I was going to sleep I got a text from Tori, it said: "UR A FREAKIN LIAR, WHAT KIND OF FRIEND ARE YOU!!!???!!!!!!!"
After this I'm thinking of making a love-hate relationship couple, I can't tell you anymore about it. But I need a title
I like it.. It just really annoys me how they make the girls so blind when it comes to relationships. But anyway Good Story
I know it short but 7 is in process Chapter 6 Oh god, please tell me she's not drunk texting me again. I had to text her back. "How much did you drink?" I texted. "I've haven't put a sip of alcohol to my lips! But you'll be tasting your own blood soon." she texted. Tasting my own blood? She's completely furious. "What did I do?" I texted. "You know what you did, Dylan told me everything." was her text. He told her what? She's supposed to be mad at him. "He told you what?". I texted. The message that came back said "He told me about what you said to him, and that you were flirting with him and kissed him because you were jealous of me. Troy don't talk to me anyone."
Hey, I'm gonna write another story and the title is in this chapter, I'm not telling anything more but it's about abuse, and there is an offensive gay slur in here, I'm bisexual and in no way am I trying to bash homosexuality or bisexuality. Chapter 7 Me being completely enraged because Dylan lied to Tori I couldn't catch much sleep. I laid in bed thinking of ways of killing him but I know I would never really do it. During school Tori shunned me like I was a non-believer. She sat at a different table at lunch. She sat with her malicious boyfriend Dylan and his idiot friends. I looked over there and Dylan gave me a devious smile. I can't take it anymore, I'm throwing all my cards in this game now. He shouldn't have her. I know this goes against my beliefs and I'll regret it later. I stood up out of my chair. I walked over to Dylan's table. Dylan said "What are you doing here homo? I don't want you kissing me." Dylan said. In my mind I was thinking hypocrite. I raised my fist in the air and gave him a blow to the nose. "How about a kiss? From my fist!" I said. My attack was seen all round the lunch room, the students swarmed around like wasp to us, chanting "FIGHT! FIGHT!". "You shouldn't have done that." Dylan growled. Dylan tackled me like I was a football player from the opposite team. Before we knew it, we were at it like crazed monkeys fighting over a banana. After 3 minutes of our brawl the principal came to end our madness. He pulled me back as the science teacher pulled Dylan back. After not fighting I realized I was in pain and had a black eye and bloody nose. Dylan was holding his chest and had a black eye. I finally caught a look at Tori, she had tears in her sapphire eyes, her makeup was running south, and her face was red like a tomaeto. I embarrassed her. "I'm sorry." I said. Tori ran off. She must hate me even more.
Try and be more descriptive during the conversations. I care more about what the characters are doing when there mad and stuff then dubstep in the shower lol. Getting better tho
And how can he tell he imbarresed her? Yes she was crying but I didn't see any signs pointing to embarrassment. Slow down and spell things out. Be descriptive.