Mia and Jeff's tricks for treats Earlier in the story Mia: hurry up Jeff get your costume on your sooo slow Jeff: Mia if you weren't my girlfriend I would go off on u Mia: yeah yeah we're Gunna hit the Ritch people's houses first my mom is Gunna give us a ride then take billy to the Halloween party k... Jeff: ... Ok I'm ready and don't forget our saying tricks and treats!!! Mia: I won't but wow u look like an actuall zombie ...(she pokes his to make sure he is still human) Jeff: wow Mia u look like an actuall vampiress Mia: Thanx Later that evening were the good stuff starts... They arrive at the springston mansion Mia: your turn to knock Jeff He knocks and grabs his bag away from Mia with catlike speed Both: tricks and treats!!! Right as they walk away with the candy they both recieved they both fall over dead after being shot the people that just witnessed it call the police and they catch the criminal... Thirty years later two lovers named Keelie and Jake turned 16 the same age as Mia and Jeff were when they were killed but they brought friends five disappearances that they know of have occurred and they are where they heard of all of them happening the one spot the old springston mansion. Jake: Ok we're Gunna be in a group but in pairs so if u get lost there will be two of u we are going to give each couple a walky talky Every couple gets a Wallky Talky Keelie: ok girls make sure the guys don't go all nuts ok All five girls respond Girls: on the girls code we swear Jake and Keelie: ok then let's go! They search for twenty minutes looking for anything right as they hear carie scream Keelie: carie!!!carie!!! Are you ok (sees the cut on caries wrist spelling out tricks or treats)...WHO ARE YOU!!!WHERE ARE YOU!!!WHAT ARE YOU!!! Jeff and Mia: we're what your looking for and were your worst nightmare.
(/)_-) this proves you only write storys for attention. I keep writing even if i think nobody reads mine! Except for when i cant figure out any ideas for that story
Well that was the end of this adventure and was supposed to be the end of this thread due to haters and apparently everywhere I go I am hated so not much use
It's considered advice. But looking at your attitude, I wouldn't really give a shit if your 'adventure' ended... But hey, that's just me. :$