my rap

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -_imtooninja_-, Aug 1, 2012.

  1. All I want to do is love you, even know our love only lasted a bit I wanna feel the soft touch of your lips on mine again. This is spoken.
    I know I was mean to you but when when I saw you kissing another girl my heart shattered it broke in two.
    I thought you be always mine but I guess I was wrong. I want you so much this is why I'm writing this for you. All I want now Is for you to be happy and I hoped you made the right choice
    Kinaya I love plz come back to me

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  2. I really didn't get any of that, it would be better as a slow song, n don't write in 1 huge paragraph...... Spread it out.
     
  3. Kk thx I'm better at saying them then writing em down it confines me