It all started with her. We would go out, get drinks, and then later we would go back and make love. It was The life, But when i woke up that morning....she was gone.
My name is Mike, Mike stan. Since the first grade ive been bullied my last name was suppose to be a first name. Im that gentle kind guy that is friend zoned by all the girls and made fun of all the guys.
Story: Well enough about my life I bet its even laughable. So when i woke up she was gone... The girl of my dreams, My first of everything! My first kiss, My first love, and the first woman i ever made love to.
I shall give you example :3 I met her she was amazing. The first girl I ever loved her name ____. You HAVE TO GO INTO DETAIL Every detail
:3 I agree. 1.DETAILS( like she said) I'm crazy for details, dude. 2.Bigger updates 3.Separate by paragraph so you know what's going on. Example- Wistful beginnings don't empty ones soul as my heart drenched for the wine that decreased the way I loved her, she felt every inch possible for a promising future, and, a huge embellishment to my life, intimately making my days of restless nights, become peaceful breaths. There ya go :3
you don't give up on stories like that, you just need to listen to advice and it gets going, trust me.