Escape

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Elysie, Jul 17, 2012.

  1. He saved her! yay
     
  2. hookers don't count
     
  3. I had no idea what to write…

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    Tiffany's POV

    I looked up as another gunshot rang out. Did some people not hear the first one?

    Then I saw the man. The man with the knife. A dark red stain slowly spread out across his chest, and a pool of blood formed around his head, which must've hit a rock.

    "Why did he shoot him?" I murmured in confusion.

    "That man tried to kill that little girl," a woman next to me answered.

    I was right. That man was evil.

    The man with the gun was shouting for people to follow him. I quickly obeyed. That man… the murderer… lied forgotten on the sand.

    "Come along," I gently told a little boy. He looked like he was about to cry. "That man is evil." I took his hand and led him after the crowd.

    One person was already dead, and we hadn't even reached the dangerous part.

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  4. Update this story is great I'm glad all you guys collaborated on this
     
  5. Amanda's turn!!
     
  6. Cynthia's POV
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    I heard a second gunshot and quickly turned around. I was puzzled, what had happened? I shrugged and continued with my work. It's not my problem. I honestly didn't care what happened to other people.

    I stepped back and smiled. My shelter was finally done! I smirked and picked up my iPod. Time for victory music! I turned on my favorite song Raised By Wolves by Falling in Reverse and did a little dance.

    So glad we were on a deserted island.

    I took my knife out of my back pocket and looked at the blade and ran it against my finger. It was very dull.....

    I took out my knife sharpener and sat on the sandy ground.

    I started to hum a song while sharpening my knife. For some reason. This whole island situation seemed to calm me down.

    I heard a beep and swore. My iPod was about to die! I bit my lip and stuffed it into my pocket. I guess music was now put of the question.
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  7. BUMP
     
  8. Do you know if Elysie is inactive?
     
  9. Well, I know her, but she isn't always inactive.
     
  10. Update hurry plz
     
  11. Elysie needs to update