Hey so here's the update for today!! Hope you like it tell me what you think and how I can improve it.. __________________________________ We arrived at a cafe. I'm not quite sure what the name was but it didn't matter. I Julia Stevenson was with Munro Mathews! " So Julia. U-Ummm how have you been? " His voice was shakey. Was Munro nervous? " I've been good you know. Yeah just been hanging out with Izzy and Cece." I felt more confident knowing that I wasn't the only one with butterflies in my stomach. " I thought Cece moved? " the puzzled look on his face made me wonder who could have told him that lie? " No um Cece didn't move." I awnsers but I know my voice showed curiosity and concern. " It's getting late I should take you home." As we drove in the car all was silent. The only noise came from the other cars outside. We finally arrived at my house and it was still quiet. " I'll see you at school Jewels." Jewels? Was that his nickname for me? I like it. " Bye Munro see you at school." I shut the car door and ran inside. I ran up stairs called Izabelle. " Finally about time you called!" something tells me she knows I was with Munro... " Spill it! Omg what happend!" I smiled and awnserd. " We talked and then before we left he asked me if Cece moved." Even saying it now is weird. But I don't understand why I'm so concerned about Cece. " Why would he do that?" Now Izabelle sounds confused. The thing is Cece is new she just moved her like 1 week ago and dosent even leave her house how could Munro know about her?
Sorry I haven't had time to write an essay were doing semester exam. But I'll update after school I promise!!
A few typos, read over your writing before you post it. And it's going all to cliché, so maybe add a few interesting twists, sweetie. Also, add a few more paragraphs, it makes it a lot easier to read. I'm not trying to be mean, honestly sweetie, I'm just trying to help you work to the best of your ability Good luck in the future -Sophia