'On Top News, The Masked Murderers have escaped from jail and could be anywhere in Miami. So keep your children inside and lock all your doors and windows'. It was Saturday afternoon and Primrose and her Mother were watching the News. Her mother and father had split up and her father had moved to Russia when she was 5. She was 9 now and she was begging her mother to take her to the park. -------------------------------------------- Primrose's POV -------------------------------------------- "Primrose, you can go your self but be careful." her mother had said At the park, Primrose sat on the swing and noticed a gang of masked people. Immediately, she remembered the news. Grabbing her phone, she phoned her mum and told her. Her mom told her to run home but the gang had blocked the gates. In the masks, we're eye holes and mouth holes. I tried to naturally walk past them but one of them grabbed my arm and pushed me down. My phone had slipped out of my pocket and my mum heard everything they said. Then, they stabbed an injection of sleeping gas into my. I fell asleep helplessly as they dragged my body away. -------------------------------------------- Hope you enjoyed
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-------------------------------------------- 5 YEARS LATER -------------------------------------------- Primrose was kidnapped and took to the gangs place. -------------------------------------------- Primroses POV -------------------------------------------- As I woke up, my head was beating. I keep having that dream of when i was nearly killed. Since then they have been beating me every morning. My eyes are black and I'm exhausted. I've been planning an escape for ages and its finally the day I'm going to escape. If l get caught, they will kill me, i actually mean kill me. Walking downstairs, I sat onto the ragged sofa and thought of my escape. I could hear the gang talking about making me kill someone. Then they walked into the living room with their masks off. I could recognise one of them. It was Daniel Rage from my Primary. -------------------------------------------- Daniels POV -------------------------------------------- Look at her, you can't blame me for kidnapping her, she's beautiful. I loved her in primary. Now I'm in secondary and I think about her all day. When I get home on a night, she's there. I must kill her to forget about her. But it's hard to kill someone so beautiful so we just torture her. -------------------------------------------- I don't write much so sorry if you don't like this. It took about 1hour to write. Feedback ?