The Day Everything Got Taken Away From Me.

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by MikalaMariee, Jul 17, 2012.

  1. Bump he sounds hawt and sorry for ur loss
     
  2. I'm very sorry for that Tash777, the same thing happened to me basically. But I was a triplet and only myself and my sister Ashton survived. We were named after birth so our sister was left without a name..although I have five sisters, we all feel that loss.

    I will update soon. 
     
  3. Awk, I'm really sorry Tash
    But, on a brighter note,
    Please update soon
     
  4. I'm updating soon! 
     
  5. ;
    Does anyone ever even read these little notes I add with my updates? If so, prove it to me tomorrow by saying happy birthday on my wall! Okay, that was random buut im in a whole lot of pain! Idk what it is...but it hurts. Anyways! Onto the story? 
    P.S; I see a lot of people like Marco so far, so tell me your favorite one: Niall vs. Marco?


    After school I had driven Marco to Central Smoothie, I don't know how he had convinced me to do it, but it went somewhere along the lines of him using a lethal dose of charm. Dang that boy keeps throwing curve-balls at me, if I was a lesser woman I'd be lapping it all up.

    "So, what are we here for?" I ask again after the waitress delivered my triple fruity smoothie and his banana strawberry crave smoothie, every time I ask I don't get a direct answer, just some useless flirty remark and his signature smirk.

    "Just wanted to be seen around a new town with a pretty girl, builds up my ego." he replied with once again a useless remark. I just hoped Niall didn't work today, because of course, what are the odds that Marco chose this place?

    "That doesn't tell me anything. If you don't tell me right now I'll just take my smoothie and leave." I threaten, gathering up my purse and phone for good measure. He had a panicked look on his face and his hand shot out to grab mine gently. Everything froze, I was just kidding around but there was nothing joking about his expression. Desperation and pleading formed, gone was the trademark smirk and flirty remarks, on his face.

    "No please, stay.." he whispered.

    "Umm. Okay.." I was dumbfounded but once he realized I wasn't going anywhere he released my hand and withdrew.

    "I'm terribly sorry, being around a beautiful American is seriously getting to me." and just like that the moments over, and the smirk slides right back on his face.
     
  6. Happy birthday!!! Lol it's 1:43am here so 
     
  7. I said happy birthday on your wall!!
     
  8. Aww thanks! I had a great birthday today! This update was created yesterday but it wouldn't allow me to post today. My birthday is July 25th. 
     
  9. *wouldnt allow me to post until today lol.
    Update coming soon! 
     
  10. Updates by noon? I think soo. 
     
  11. I'm horrible! My best friend got back from the hospital due to a blood clot in her lung and I went to go see her. 
     
  12.  OMG IS SHE OKAY??
     
  13. Hopefully, she can hardly do anything right now. The whole time I was there (5-7 hours) I helped her and finally an hour before I left she fell asleep.
     
  14. And P.S;
    Tomorrow I get to see my father who lives 2 hours away from me, so I hardly ever see him: maybe a couple times a year. So I dont know if there will be an update tomorrow.. 
     
  15. Aww… can you update the day after tomorrow?
     
  16. ;
    Since I'm not with my dad YET I am updating for you guys, this is just a filler before the prom update and this update is going to be posted in two parts, this one and the next one following. Then the prom update will also be posted in two parts! Excited?! I sure am! 


    This morning I was rushing to get to school before the tardy bell, I had woke up late not hearing my alarm clock. And since I promised everyone to not slack off in school anymore I jumped right out of bed, showered and fixed my hair in as little as 10 minutes, brushed my teeth and put my make up on in five, then I dressed in a flowery dress with cheetah print tights and pink flats.

    I skipped breakfast and jumped into my car and sped out of my driveway towards school which was luckily only ten minutes away and there was twenty minutes till even the first bell.

    When I got to school I had to meet up with Marco who gave me a heck of a time the past three weeks he's been here, yeah it's been three weeks already and prom was this weekend. I had no date still.

    I swore the boy was bipolar because he was so sweet when we were alone, but when we were in public he was a cocky son of a gun, with that stupid smirk always plastered onto his face. In these weeks he's become a great friend to me, although he's always insisting there's more to our friendship. I really don't know how I even deal with him, but I know he's right, because I feel this excitement every time I know I get to see him. Things weren't better with Niall, plus i was still in love with him, and if anything they were worse since I was always with Marco and my other three best friends in the halls, it's not because of my other friends it's because of Marco and he makes it perfectly clear.

    I was basically just slowly walking into the school now that I didnt need to worry about being late, when I heard someone call my name.

    I turn to see Niall running up to me, and my heart immediately quickened seeing him.

    "Wow, you waited." he breathed when he got to where I was.

    "Well, I normally wait for people who call my name..but if that's all you needed to say I need to go see someone." I open the door and he slams it closed.

    "You need to go see Marco, don't try and fool me." he spoke softly but firmly.

    "So what? Why should you care?! left me over something you thought I said!" I shove him so I can get to the door but he doesn't budge, stupid sexy scottish ass.

    "How was I supposed to know?! Then you were so quiet and in your shell after Nikohls death, I couldn't get anything out of you, not a word. I felt so helpless as I could only watch you spiral into a depression, I needed to do something so badly for you that I would've walked to the ends of the earth. Why? Because I loved you!" every word that came out of his mouth had an extra bit of force in it.

    "Loved? Thats past tense as in you don't love me anymore?" the thought of him no loving me sent me into a sort of frenzied panic, and it felt like a hand repeatedly squeezing my heart.

    "I never said I didn't, did I? No matter how stupid my heart gets, I will always love you. Forever and that's a promise."
     
  17. Disregard the first post!
    There were much to many mistakes so I'll repost with them fixed!
    ;
    Since I'm not with my dad YET I am updating for you guys, this is just a filler before the prom update and this update is going to be posted in two parts, this one and the next one following. Then the prom update will also be posted in two parts! Excited?! I sure am! 


    This morning I was rushing to get to school before the tardy bell, I had woke up late not hearing my alarm clock. And since I promised everyone to not slack off in school anymore I jumped right out of bed, showered and fixed my hair in as little as 10 minutes, brushed my teeth and put my make up on in five, then I dressed in a flowery dress with cheetah print tights and pink flats.

    I skipped breakfast and jumped into my car and sped out of my driveway towards school which was luckily only ten minutes away and there was twenty minutes till even the first bell.

    When I got to school I had to meet up with Marco who gave me a heck of a time the past three weeks he's been here, yeah it's been three weeks already and prom was this weekend. I had no date still.

    I swore the boy was bipolar because he was so sweet when we were alone, but when we were in public he was a cocky son of a gun, with that stupid smirk always plastered onto his face. In these weeks he's become a great friend to me, although he's always insisting there's more to our friendship.

    I really don't know how I even deal with him, but I know he's right, because I feel this excitement every time I know I get to see him. Things weren't better with Niall, plus I was still in love with him. And if anything they were worse since I was always with Marco.

    Right as I was basically just slowly walking into the school, now that I didn't need to worry about being late, I heard someone call my name.

    I turn to see Niall running up to me, and my heart immediately quickened seeing him.

    "Wow, you waited." he breathed when he got to where I was.

    "Well, I normally wait for people who call my name..but if that's all you needed to say I need to go see someone." I open the door and he slams it closed.

    "You need to go see Marco, don't try and fool me." he spoke softly but firmly.

    "So what? Why should you care?! You left me over something you thought I said!" I shove him so I can get to the door but he doesn't budge, stupid sexy scottish ass.

    "How was I supposed to know?! Then you were so quiet and in your shell after Nikohls death, I couldn't get anything out of you, not a word. I felt so helpless as I could only watch you spiral into a depression, I needed to do something so badly for you that I would've walked to the ends of the earth. Why? Because I loved you!" every word that came out of his mouth had an extra bit of force in it.

    "Loved? Thats past tense as in you don't love me anymore?" the thought of him no longer loving me sent me into a sort of frenzied panic, and it felt like a hand repeatedly squeezing my heart.

    "I never said I didn't, did I? No matter how stupid my heart gets, I will always love you. Forever and that's a promise."
     
  18.  I read the first one before I saw that…