The Forbidden Kind

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -KittyInBunnyland-, Jul 19, 2012.

  1.  Angela I love you!  Thank you so much for the compliment but I know I suck at details.  AAAAAH! Here's a short update.
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    ㅡ Raven's POV ㅡ

    I could feel so much electric current crawling in my veins. It's so magical. It feels so good.

    I held my arms frontward and stare in horror at my pale skin. My veins are showing. It was too visible. I look at Nolaine in horror, I want to scream but I couldn't. Something is holding me back.

    I can feel a twitch in my body. Too painful! I could hear my bones breaking. Big drops of tears came streaming down my now red cheeks.

    Nolaine just stands there, tears streaming, not knowing what to do. Her mouth moving, yet I couldn't hear her. What is happening to me? Am I becoming what I fear the most...? Not just a witch, but a... But a... Xelock; like my grandmother who ended up being slain by my grandfather. Even if he didn't want to, he had to... In order to protect humanity. In order to protect the world he deeply cares for. My grandfather is the son of mother nature. Literally. Mother Nature opposed of him to marry my witch of a grandmother, but love took over.

    But why follow your heart when you know there's no future for the both of you? A kind that is very much against God's will.

    But why am I becoming a Xelock? I'm not an heiress. I'm not a royal witch. Who am I, really? The royal family of the Ipswitch is Nolaine's. She's suppose to be the one who's gonna transform to a Xelock. Not me. My grandmother's situation was different. She WANTED to be one, in order to control the covenant, to control everything around her.

    I don't want to be a Xelock. I didn't perform a spell to be a Xelock. I am not skilled for black magic. But... is it really true? I can feel another shock shooting on my brain. The pain is adding too much.

    My head turns violently, breaking every boned in my body, something's coming out of my back. I look at it and see a large black feathered wings. I look back at Nolaine in so much pain, I mouthed, HELP ME.
     
  2. BUMP!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!
     
  3. I made it up on my own.  I don't know any other fearful creatures...
     
  4. Lol I made up a monster creature thing when I was little his name was babcoobi I'm still scared of him  even tho I have no idea how he looks...lmao
     
  5. Babcoobi, sounds cute rather than scary  Hahaha! Maybe it looks like a blob? 
     
  6. Haha I named it that bc that's what I said when I seen it lol I know I was a very random child
     
  7. And maybe. We will never know 
     
  8.  Awwww. So cute. Hahaha  I've never seen a monster. 
     
  9. I have it was scary her name is aunt Norma  I'll tell you the story in pm
     
  10.  EVILNESS
     
  11. The torture, the suffering, it's killing me insideㅡ no, it's killing all of me.

    I scream in so much pain. But Nolaine can't hear me. Every time she tries to come near me, a force brings her flying back.

    The feeling is treacherous. Every bones in my body twitches and makes a loud breaking sound. I break down in my knees and the wings still expanding. When is ENOUGH?!

    After a few minutes, I can now hear Nolaine's voice. A hint of agony and worry. Her voice cracking as she screams my name. No one's around. I thought. It just happens to be on time that everyone except the Ipswitch daughters are on the journey to somewhere only God knows.

    I open my eyes slowly, my wings still hurting. My wings. Unbelievable. I've turn to a creature that I never ever wanted. A Xelock. The worst of all kind. The forbidden kind. Black wica, a servant of Lucifer, and the seven devils inside of me are made of a Xelock.

    Nolaine stares at me in horror and runs swiftly out of the house. Am I that scary? I cried.

    I look at the full length mirror in front of me. Looking at my reflection, I never thought a Xelock would be this beautiful. I walk slowly and admire my crystal White eyes, my wings, my shiny hair... unbelievable. But this isn't who I am.

    I feel another twitch, a shock on my brain. I can feel the black magic coming to life in flesh. In me.

    I stare in horror at myself as I try to fight it off. But it wins over me. Unknowingly I jump off the window. Flying flawlessly and there I see the four. Ready to slay the devil in meㅡ ready for the worst to happen.

    I dramatically go down, smirking at the four of them. "Weaklings." I say.

    Rose eyes widen in fear. She looks so innocent, so naïve. This must be the first time she sees a Xelock in flesh.

    Nolaine, Emilya and Angela has seen one before. Butㅡ who did they see? I can read their minds but what they're thinking is incredulous!

    "... A Xe-Xelock...?" Rose says.
    "... She's transforming again?" Angela screams in her mind.
    "... It's like that time!" Emilya cries.
    "... She's back. In flesh. Beatrice is back." Nolaine says calmly in her mind as she stares at me with no expression.

    Beatrice... my grandmother?
     
  12.  OMG
     
  13. Bump. Ahh do satisfying. Next topic.
    AM I BEING REPLACED!!!
    Angela is here all the time and I'm not I though I was the number one fan
     
  14. YOU ARE!!! You started reading Eli's stories before I even knew about Party in My Dorm…
     
  15. You are Rose. 
    It's fine. As long as you're reading it, lovely.
     
  16. Oh. Ok I'm cool then. We shall be number one fans TOGETHER!!!
    Plus Party and Toxic and Emilyla
     
  17.  I love you guys.
    Rose, read "Colour My World~" please? 
     
  18. It's amazing!!!