the one that wouldn't leavepart 2

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *nmc6779 (01), Jul 23, 2012.

  1. Part 2: Jennifer
    I was excited for school today. I bought new clothes that was sure to get Derek's attention. A white lace top with buttons down the middle in front, and black shorts. Black and white are his favorite team colors. I was sure to attract him.
    I was making my way down the hall with my friend Sandra Turner. Sandra isn't really like me. She's a bit nerdy. You know, star wars and stuff. But she's a good friend cause she listens to me. Anyways, I was walking down the hall with Sandra, when I noticed Derek. I knew this was the only time I could talk to him before the bell rang for class. I tell sandra to distract his friend Wade, another boy that wants me, while I make my move on Derek.
    "Hey Wade, will you help me with something for a sec?" said Sandra. Wade then followed Sandra towards the water fountain across the hall. Now was my chance.
    "Oh hey Derek! What's up?" I said while leaning against the locker.
    "nothing just trying to get stuff out of my locker." he said while pointing to the locker I was leaning on.
    "woops," I began "I'm sorry about that."
    "don't worry about it." he said in a sweet mono toned voice.
    "so, what do you think about my outfit today?" I ask seeing if it'll impress him.
    "I don't know what to think of it I'm not a fashion designer."
    "ahaha! Oh Derek you're so funny!"
    "yeah I'm hilarious." he said. "well I have to go to class now. Bye. Wade lets go!"
    I couldn't let him walk away yet. "wait! Let me walk with you to class! Our classes are right next to each other!"
    "Um er, I can't, I'm gonna stop by the bathroom. I got to pee." he said.
    I can tell he was nervous to be with me so I let him go by himself
    "oh, alright, see you-" he left as I was talking mid-sentence.
    "poor guy." I say to Sandra.
    "why what's wrong?" asks Sandra.
    "can't you tell? He has such a big crush on me he practically peed himself chatting with me!"
    "or maybe he doesn't like you and he just wanted to get away from you." said Sandra in such a sassy tone.
    "oh what would you know Sandra!" I say angrily. She was just jealous. She liked Derek too. She knows I have a better chance with him too.
    Part 2: Derek
    It's Monday and I wasn't really excited. Monday is usually when Jennifer shows me the stupid new outfit she bought over the weekend. I hated when a girl did that. I honestly don't care about a girls appearance. She's so egotistical. Anyways, me and my friend Wade were talking in the hall when he gave me the code.
    "princess conceited diamond coming in at 3 o'clock." he said.
    That meant Jennifer was coming my way. She had her friend Sandra. I liked Sandra. She's sweet, smart and cute. But Jennifer always treats her like crap.
    Sandra was basically the wingwoman. She took Wade aside, miss.perfect tried flirting with me and talked about her outfit. She leaned against my locker and I began to get annoyed. I was trying to get stuff out of there.
    "so what do you think about my outfit today?" She asked as if I cared.
    She was wearing black and white. My favorite team's colors. But she looked horrible in it. I didn't want to hurt her feelings, but I didn't want to lie to her either.
    "I don't know what I'm supposed to think of it I'm not a fashion designer."
    She begins to giggle loudly, obviously not sensing the sarcasm in my voice. I just wanted to get away from her. I quickly said I had to go and called Wade so we can leave. But she stopped and offered to walk me to class. I didn't want to walk with her anywhere so I had to think of a way to leave.
    "um, er, I have to use the bathroom." I said hastily.
    As she was mid-sentence of her good bye, I quickly scurried off, hoping she wont follow me. Thankfully she didn't. I wish she just realized I don't have feelings for her. And I doubt I ever will.
     
  2. It's really getting there.
    Thank you for putting my advice in.
     
  3. Please tell me what you think! I can keep posting in the same thread if thatll make it easier! I'm new to this so please help! Thanks xx 
     
  4. Your fine, stay on this thread and keep going.
     
  5. Bump it's really good make it paragraphs so it's easier to read and add more details about what the room looks like so reader can visual what it looks like
     
  6. What's bump? Lol I'm sorry I'm so uneducated in this fanfiction 
     
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  8. Part 3: Jennifer
    It's Wednesday. The best day of the week. This is when me and Derek have to do the morning announcements together. Yes! I get to spend a full hour in the morning with those luscious blue eyes and peach-soft blonde hair.
    Oh yeah I never told you how my hunk of a man looks like. He's 5'9, athletic build (he plays basketball, so hot.), mysterious blue colored eyes that I can stare at for an eternity, and soft blonde hair. He's the epitome of the perfect guy. His smile can brighten a dark room.
    Derek Phillips is perfect. And I'm perfect for him.
    Part 3: Derek
    Great. It's Wednesday. I have to spend an hour and ten minutes with the spawn of Paris Hilton. Her fake blonde hair, stupid designer brand clothing, and that stupid fake smile. Fake smile you ask? Yeah she has veneers. One day she had a sweet child like smile, next day she smiles like a horse. she won't admit to it, but we all know it's true.
    I would actually consider liking Jennifer if she wasn't so snobby. I honestly don't see what Wade sees in her.
    He's gonna ask her out on the morning announcements. But anonymously. There's a segment where we read these little letters people leave to their friends, girlfriends, and boyfriends but anonymously.
    So the letter from Wade reads "I've had my eye on you for awhile Jennifer Patricia Blake, meet me by locker 302 so I can ask you out. Xoxo." Wade is a sucker for romance. I hope everything for him works out.
    Part 4: Jennifer
    I leave so i can get to the set super early to prepare Derek's favorite morning snack. A bagel with peanut butter with a tall glass of milk.
    When I get there he's sitting there on the phone, with a letter in his hands. What could the letter say? I decide to eavesdrop on what he's saying.
    "Wade," he begins "you sure I should read this letter in the segment?"
    I can't hear what Wade says but I keep listening to find out what's on the letter.
    "But what if she rejects it? She might not feel the same way!"
    When I heard that I instantly knew he had to be talking about me.
    "ok it's a big risk but eh, it won't hurt to try, who knows! Maybe she feels even more! Ok see you today dude bye."
    He stuffs the letter in his pocket and walks to the food table to make his bagel. This is my time to walk in.
    "oh hey Derek you're here early!" I say gingerly.
    "I try to be punctual." he says, I can hear the nervousness in his voice.
    I try to find out more information about the letter. "So, are you gonna read the anon segment today or should I?" I edge closer to him as I speak.
    "erm, I'll read it today. A friend of mine left a letter and he'd prefer if I read it."
    "oh a 'friend' you say. Which friend?" I say raising my eyebrows.
    "I can't tell you, it's anonymous." he said.
    "oh, well you can tell mr.anonymous good luck with his letter." I winked at him and walked away excited for what's to come.
    Part 4: Derek
    I call Wade to make sure of the letter. I don't want him getting his heart broken over some snob.
    "dude I'm positive! She will think this gesture is super cute and can't say no!" he says overconfident.
    I try to support him. "it's a big risk but eh, it won't hurt to try. Who knows! Maybe she feels even more! Ok see you today dude bye."
    My stomach growls so I put the letter in my pocket and walk over to the food table to make myself a bagel with peanut butter. It's my favorite thing to eat in the morning. As I'm about to enjoy my bagel, princess bling bling comes in.
    "oh hey Derek you're here early!"
    She knew I'd be here early. That's why she's here early.
    "So, are you gonna read the anon segment today or should I?" she asks.
    Crap. She heard the conversation I was having with Wade. And she knows it's about her. She can't read that segment today.
    "erm, I'll read it today. A friend of mine left a letter and he'd prefer if I read it." I say quickly.
    "oh a 'friend' you say. Which friend?" she asks suspiciously
    "I can't tell you, it's anonymous." I said. I think she knows.
    "oh, well you can tell mr.anonymous good luck with his letter." and she winked at me and walked away. I was so confused. I didn't wanna ruin the surprise for wade. I hope she doesn't know it's him.
     
  9. Part 5: Jennifer
    I was so anxious for the anon segment. I wanted to hear the letter so bad! I asked the producer if we could do that segment first.
    "Can we please do the anon segment first Miss.T?"
    "Why do we have to do it first? What's so important about it?" she asks getting impatient.
    "um, just to get it over with. It's my least favorite segment anyways."
    "ugh fine anything to get you to leave me alone. PLACES WE HAVE 40 SECONDS TILL WE'RE LIVE."
    I rush to my seat excited and nervous. "Derek, change of line up. The anon segment is up first and then the lunch specials."
    "um ok I guess that's fine." he said. Poor thing is nervous.
    The camera man begins. "We're live in five, four, three, two" he points and Derek begins to speak.
    "Good morning students! This is Derek Phillips."
    "and I'm Jennifer Patricia Blake. A good morning it is Derek." I give him a wink queuing him about the segment.
    "today we'll start with the anon segment." he said joyfully.
    This is it.
    "the first letter is for Taylor Baker and it says 'you're sweeter than cupcakes and you're a great friend Tay-Tay!' you have a great friend taylor!"
    He read two more letters until it was finally the last one.
    "Oh this letter is for our own Jennifer Blake. The letter says 'I've had my eye on you for awhile Jennifer Blake, meet me at locker 302 so I can ask you out. Xoxo'. Well, it seems that Jennifer has an admirer." he smirks at me in the cutest way. "will you be meeting your admirer at locker 302?"
    I giggle "oh yes I will, see you there mystery man." I wink and smile the biggest smile. My cheek bones hurt.
    "now on to our lunch specials for the day..." he says.
    I cannot wait for announcements to be over.
    Announcements are finished and I grab my things and run off to locker 302. I wanted to get there before Derek so I can freshen up a bit. But then Wade shows up.
    "hey wade." I say obviously not excited to see him.
    "hey there Jen." he says looking down fumbling with his fingers.
    "if you don't mind, I'm meeting someone here, so can you leave?"
    "I'm that someone Jen. Hehe."
    My mouth drops. I'm on the verge of tears. Why would Derek do this to me?
    "you....you're....the secret admirer?" I stutter.
    "yeah sorry if I'm not up to your expectations, but I really, really, like you. I wanna take you out."
    I don't know what to say. But an idea hits me. I can make Derek jealous with his best friend. So I decide to go with this plan.
    "I'd love to go out with you." I say touching his shoulder.
    "really? Oh my god thank you! I was going to cry if I was going to be rejected."
    I pretend to listen but I notice Derek talking to Sandra. Sandra's giggling. He brushes a hair from her face and gives her a hug. Jealousy builds in me I have to think fast. Derek glances over. My mind is racing and I didn't know what to do so in that moment I give Wade a kiss on the lips. A long, fake passionate, kiss. I let go after realizing what I did.
    "Thursday night, movies? Pick me up at seven." I wink at him, giving him another kiss but on the cheek, and walk away. Hoping this hit Derek in the heart.
    Part 5: Derek
    I got in my seat ready to do the announcements. When Jennifer ran up and told me we were doing the anon segment first. Did she know it was Wade that wrote it? Did she even know it was for her?
    I started reading the first few letters. Then I came to Wade's letter. When I finished reading it I asked Jennifer if she would meet her admirer. She said yes, winked at me, and had a bigger smile than a jack-I-lantern. Once the announcements were over she ran for the door. I was walking to find Wade when I ran into Sandra. I have a bit of a crush on her so I thought why not chat with her.
    "Sandra wait up!" I call.
    "oh hey derek. What's up?" she says sweetly.
    "nothing just thought I'd chat with you. What's up with you?"
    We started talking and I thought why not ask her to the movies. We get to the lockers across from locker 302. We watch Wade work his magic on Jennifer. I ask Sandra and she seems surprised but she says yes to our date. After I hug her I see Jennifer and Wade already making out. Wade you animal!