The one that wouldn't leave.

Hey guys! First time writer here! I'm just gonna post a short story I wrote! If it receives good feedback and is liked, I'll post more! If not, I'll keep trying! This story is written in a boy and a girl POV.

Part 1: Jennifer Patricia Blake.
My name is Jennifer Patricia Blake. I'm fourteen years old and I go to James Madison junior high. Straight A student, athletic, pretty, popular, and fabulous. As you can incur, I can get any guy I want. Nearly every guy at school wants me! Girls would kill to be me, with these guys coming for me left and right. But, even though I have all these options, only one guy catches my eye. Derek Jacob Phillips. A smart, charming, cute, and sweet boy. I've been bitten by the love bug. A poisonous bug that'll make me ill and surely kill me. Derek is one of the only boys that doesn't show his affection for me. But nevertheless, I won't stop until Derek Jacob Phillips, becomes mine.

Part 1: Derek Jacob Phillips.
I'm Derek Jacob Phillips. I'm not really a big deal. I mean I get good grades and I'm healthy, but I'm not all that. But Jennifer thinks other. This self-absorbed, prissy girl that's in love with me. I'm not joking! My friend Wade, who's in love with her, saw her writing my name with hearts all over it, on her arm! I don't understand why she chooses me out of the HUNDRED guys that would love to kiss at her feet. I honestly wish she chose someone else to drool over. What do guys see in her anyways? She's mean, self-absorbed, annoying, a show-off, the list could go on! I wish she would leave me alone! I hate Jennifer Patricia Blake.

 

Please tell me what you think! Should I take something out, put something in? Should u even continue this story or start a new one??

 

Thank you! Yes paragraphs I will, I just thought I'd put this in a chunk to give a little taste!
Thanks sky!