hey guys! quick question!

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  1. Oooo! CJS loves poetry!
     
    #41 Hermes-IN-DaClouds, Jul 23, 2012
  2. Sup Hermes, haha.
     
    #42 Ryan_Shadows, Jul 23, 2012
  3. Lol I'm surprised that he can read
     
    #43 *renamed489189 (01), Jul 23, 2012
  4. Ok poems now.. Shh ..all be quiet
     
    #44 Ryan_Shadows, Jul 23, 2012
  5. Poems pls
     
    #45 Danzo, Jul 23, 2012
  6. Lol what's up Ryan!
     
    #46 Hermes-IN-DaClouds, Jul 23, 2012
  7. Poems!
    \(^_^)/
     
    #47 Hermes-IN-DaClouds, Jul 23, 2012
  8. Here is a poem while we wait:


    I once had a chicken.
    His name was Frank.
    Potatoes
     
    #48 Hermes-IN-DaClouds, Jul 23, 2012
  9. Here's my answering poem.

    I feel bad about Frank
    I had a Chicken
    Named Tank
    He died
     
    #49 Danzo, Jul 23, 2012
  10. The Sun is big
    Oh how great it can be
    It bakes our pig
    It warms our tea
    Oh how great can the sun be
    It warms our wig
    It pays our fee
    Oh how wish I was the sun


    ~Sun
     
    #50 *renamed489189 (01), Jul 23, 2012
  11. The first poem is in a separate thread! It's quite cheesy! But I wrote it five years ago when I was in year 11 in high school be gentle 
     
    #51 *nmc6779 (01), Jul 23, 2012
  12. I liked Tank.
    He was friends with Frank.
    Sidewalk
     
    #52 Hermes-IN-DaClouds, Jul 23, 2012
  13. Yes I remember
    There friendship was never better
    Watermelon
     
    #53 Danzo, Jul 23, 2012
  14. They had a life.
    Until they met the knife.
    Lightbulb
     
    #54 Hermes-IN-DaClouds, Jul 23, 2012
  15. I would like to comment at least once here,
    poetry is a form of art, an art of words. Strong, emotional, and well... inspirational at times. If you want to post poems go ahead. Just be sure you read over them before you post. If you send out one, I want to see a masterpiece or at least something powerful.
     
    #55 Master-Gonzo-the-Phoenix, Jul 23, 2012
  16. Thank you! I am currently working on an emotional one right now! I strive to make poetry both entertaining and powerful!
     
    #56 *nmc6779 (01), Jul 23, 2012
  17. Well, I hope it is not too dramatic. And do not be afraid to show your family.
     
    #57 Master-Gonzo-the-Phoenix, Jul 23, 2012
  18. My family isn't very understanding about my writing. They find it a waste of time to often. And my friends are very immature and will just ridicule me. But I'll try  thanks again!
     
    #58 *nmc6779 (01), Jul 23, 2012
  19. Ha yeah Ive only showed my mom, grandma, and Uncle one song of mine.. Nothing else 
     
    #59 Ryan_Shadows, Jul 23, 2012
  20. I'm awesome[\color]
     
    #60 *---VCAWESOME--- (01), Jul 23, 2012
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