Alright guys here we go!!!! This just suddenly came to me! Whooop! Running. Panting. Stumbling. I was running through the dark, wet woods. My dark brown hair drenched, sticking to me, from the pouring rain. As well as my clothes that were stained red near neck. I felt so... Different. Powerful. Strong. But most of all.. Extremely thirsty. But thirsty for something I couldn't think of. It wasn't water it was.... Something. Stumbling through the forest trying to escape this dark abyss. What I thought were brown, now bright red eyes, scanned the forest. This rain making it hard to see. So... Thirsty... Mentally I felt weak but physically I felt strong. What was going on inside me? I stopped. I looked at my hands. Now extremely pale. I looked at my legs. Pale as well. What is this!? What's happening!? I looked around and continued stumbling. The soft mud making it harder to walk properly. I looked around not seeing anything but the formations of the dark trees taunting me. The rain pouring down making me feel blind. I stopped as I saw a figure. A man. Or a teenager. "Hello?" I said barely auidible. I sounded scared and weak. But then... I smelled it. Blood. "Kat?" I heard the figure say. The voice was extremely familiar but nothing stopped me next. I don't know what made me but I charged towards the guy. Tackling him pinning down. He struggled but with this new strength I was too strong for him. I pulled his shirt down so that I had a clear path to his neck. Thirsty His chest rising and falling. He was panicking. Looking around frantically. But we were alone here. The guy was scared. I sensed fear just by feeling him. Suddenly.. I sank my teeth into his neck. Sucking his sweet blood. Mmmm how the red substance immediately gave me a new strength. I sank my teeth deeper not being able to control myself. I heard screams from the man but I ignored them. The blood was too good. So satisfying. Once I finished. I sat up and look at cold dead body I had sucked the blood out of. Blood dripping from my red lips. I froze at the sight. This wasn't an ordinary passing guy. This man I had known all my life. This man had watched me grow. Kept the bullies away in school. Helped me in every way he could. Supported me in every way he could. He never let out of his sight unless he knew I was happy. Tears dripped down my pale, cold skin. "I'm sorry Gus." I cried. "I'm so so sorry." I laid next to him crying my heart out. Screaming. Punching a tree. Nothing would relieve me of this guilt. I couldn't believe what I had just done. I would never forgive myself. Ever. I just killed my very own brother. Was this the monster I've become?
Blehh sorta. I'm listening to the song "Time" by Hans Zimmer. It's a song from the soundtrack of the movie Inception. And it kind of inspired me I guess.
Some places where you put periods should've been commas, and some places you put commas should've been periods. The oneshot was sort of choppy... I suggest you use some other words, because I see a lot of the same words being used. :>
@Oreo Pie. Really? I'm really sorry!!! I didn't mean it to be the same... >_< @Chloe I did that on purpose but yeah it's not my best writing.
Hahaha nahhh don't worry about it! This was off the top of my head So I knew it wasn't gonna be that great.