The Day Everything Got Taken Away From Me.

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by MikalaMariee, Jul 17, 2012.

  1. I'm working on the update now! 
     
  2. Later in the day I was still thinking about prom, and how this year I'd have to go without Nikohl. And I actually had to go, they were holding another memorial for her there, and my presence was apparently necessary.

    It was going to be hard, but I knew what I was going to wear at least, Nikohls prom dress from last year. It was a gorgeous orange hue with a ruched strapless top that was half covered in glitter and diamonds, fake of course, and the skirt flared out into a salsa type dress with sheer fabric and such.

    Although we were identical twins, I had more of a Marilyn Monroe figure, while she had a Kate Middleton figure. So the dress obviously would have to be altered. That wasnt a problem though, because my mother thought the idea was wonderful and hired the best tailors in the state, great.

    I was so preoccupied with my thoughts that I hadn't realized where I was going until I ran straight into somebody. Flattened on the ground I groan, this was fantastic.

    " Sorry Nich. Here." oh god, that nickname, the voice, I look up and sure enough it's Nial in all his Scottish splendor. His hand reached out to help me up and for some reason I took it.

    "Um thanks." I mutter once I'm back on my feet and I had righted my skirt which had precariously risen up a bit to far judging from the draft I felt. Nial noticed to I'm guessing because the look in his eye was, of course, of longing.

    "Ye welcome." his Scottish bid had deepened, yup I was right my naughty skirt had enticed him. Bad skirt bad.

    I finally look him in the eye, and I froze, it was like I was standing in quicksand and he was the rope that would save my life. Very cheesy, but very true. His green eyes held me mesmerized like they always had, I was vulnerable to him, so vulnerable. He took a step toward me and I couldn't move...it was far to movie cliche for me but I couldn't control myself. My heart yearned for him, I truly did love him, am in love with him. By the look in his eyes I could tell he still returned those feelings.

    He took another step then another step until we were so close our noses almost touched.

    "I've got to get to class Nial.." I finally was able to muster up enough breath to whisper.

    "Ye ken schools over, don't Ye?" he whispered back, his fingers raised up to trace down my cheekbone.

    "It-um yea but I have to get home, there's uh..my cat you see.." then as I was stumbling to ramble out any sounding excuse so he wouldn't notice how heat racked my body was from being this close to him, he leaned down and kissed me.

    ; what'd ya'll think eh? Also I didn't want to make you guys associate this story with the group One Direction, because they have an Irish singer named Niall, and I'm in love with the name, so I used it. And I really wanted my character to have a sexy edgy accent so I couldnt choose Irish, although it would have been my first choice...I chose Scottish because that's my second favorite. Vocab you may not understand though;
    Ken- means know. So, I ken it is ; I know it is. Got it? Great! Lettme know what you think! 
     
  3. Bump
     
  4. Ohhh I don't know what to do?! I want Nial and Nicholette back together but then the story would seem to rushed. And on the other hand I love jealousy between people destined to be together...urghh!! Advice?
     
  5. Bump..nothing? 
     
  6. Oh my Gosh!! I know what to do; I've neglected Nikohl for a while. Her memory mixed in with Nicholettes need for Nial? Equation solved! Update will be up soon! 
     
  7. Bump update!!!
     
  8. I was about to ask you about the One Direction thing! Plus you have a character named Liam! And named Dela! 

    B-U-M-P-!
     
  9. Dela's the name of my best friend in real life.  do I don't know how that fits into One Direction..and I've always used the name Liam in my stories, totally forgot he was in the group as well! 
    Update will be up soon!
     
  10. All of a sudden it became too much for me, Nikohls ever-looming memory and my insane need to be near Nial all the time was just too much for me. I shoved Nial away from me and sprinted down the hallway and towards the school parking lot where my car that I was given after the crash was parked.

    I rushed to get my keys out of my satchel and unlocked my car, practically diving into the drivers seat. It was a pearl colored Volkswagen Bug. I jammed the key in the ignition and started the car, pulling my seatbelt on in the process.

    Before I could put it in reverse and back out of my parking spot I heard my passenger door open and Nial slid in. He reached over me and took the keys out of the ignition and locked the doors. I don't know why, I could just unlock them myself.

    "Stop running from me." I could tell he ran after me, by the flush to his skin..his lovely skin.

    'Stop it Nich, figure out how to get away from him before he can hurt you like Nikohl did.' A little voice whispered. I looked around, but I knew it was in my head.

    'Nikohl never hurt me, and Nial would never so just shut up' I was freaking talking to myself, great...

    "Nicholette, listen tae me! I love Ye, and I can't stand seeing Ye deteriorate like this. Ye ken this isn't the way tae go about things. Running from me?" he rested his elbows on his knees and his head in his hands. I had the sudden urge to comfort him.

    "Nial I just can't do this right now...everything is still so fresh and my instincts now are to run from things that can hurt me." I say as if it would diffuse the situation.

    "Ye think I could ever hurt ya?! I'd never! Jeezus Nich how could ya ever think of me so?" his voice rose with every word and I realized then what I said.

    "No wait Nial, you don't get it—"

    "Nay, I think I do. Good bye grádh." he unlocked the doors, put the keys back in the ignition and got out never looking back.


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    Sorry guys, I didn't want it to happen but it had too. 
    Vocab Ya Don't Know;
    Grádh: Love
    Ken: Know

     
  11. I have the urge to update again, so I will. Writing gives me a thrill. 
     
  12. OMG UPDATE NOW LIKE NOW!
     
  13. YES PLEASE UPDATE:D
     
  14. You have been blessed by Toxic.
    Update.